All Comments on 'Forcing Aunt Lisa Ch. 05'

by KEVGOW

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justdoit4ujustdoit4ualmost 16 years ago
Change categories

Change category to Group Sex. Your story is so unrealistic, it's losing its punch. Go back to Ch.1 and 2 and see what worked.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Loved it!

I really loved it. Don't care whether or not some of it seemed realistic or not. The very idea of a gangbang/incest crossover is very erotic to me. Especially when it involves pregnancy. If possible, could you write a chapter where aunt Lisa and cousin Allison both are pregnant and eventually gives birth?

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Curious

Will there be a sequel to this?

spbowlspbowlover 14 years ago
MORE

YOU SHOULD DO ANOTHER CHAPTER...DOES ALLISON GET PREGNANT?HAVE CJ FUCK ALLISON... DOES IT CONT. AFTER THE BABY IS BORN... IS AUNTIE A SLUT THEN

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Monzetsu style, for connaisseurs only

You are a fan of Monzetsu for sure. And so am I, that’s why I love your story so much. As long as it’s about rape and pregnancy with giant dicks passing through the cervix, your work can only please me. (Beware, the fucking between the son and his mother is way too soft, make it harder). In “Tokimeki Fainting In Agony Balkan”, Monzetsu draws a woman getting fucked while being pregnant – one can see the baby inside! You know what you have to do now.

But please, enough of Black stallions humilating White women. Why not a Black virgin lady raped by a White dick for a change? She would get pregnant and of course would scream, scream, scream...

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
can't leave it here

need to finish the story, it needs an end...

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Hot

One of the hottest stories I've read in a long time.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
VERY HOT!!!

Mmmm... love your hot series... incest/gangbanging/reluctance/deep penetration... bring on the next chapter

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
THIS IS NONE-EROTIC - it's just bullshit. No good for no one.

Hey weirdo - you sure know that you're brain-sick ??

Seriously - I read Ch. 1 to where you described the guy's dick; 4 up to 5 inches in diameter !???! Buster - that's more than YOUR length. Isn't that funny?

Or is that a non-human fantasy? Or, do you know exactly nothing about the human body, let alone a feminine?

I stopped right there; I couldn't bring myself to read on any further.

Keep dreaming your gross dreams; but do everybody (including yourself) a favor AND STOP WRITING. If ever that scribble could be called the W-word.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
More is Needed

You need to continue the story. It's been interesting so far.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
I. Loved. It.

Please write more!! I am begging you!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
first chapter was better

Take some time and write another chapter with the detail you had before. Maybe try writing from third person singular?

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
You are in the groove. there are many of us who are

looking forward with much anticipation for more chapters and added people.

chocolatesistachocolatesistaover 10 years ago
more please

i came across this and i was like damn this is good

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
10 times each?

Why not 40 or 60 times or even better keep it real add more boys if necessary to make it 80-100 times.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Spank-matter

Is it reality-based? Not really. This story contains lots of factual inaccuracies and physically impossible situations. But, then again, so do most movies. However, is it erotic, sexy, and will it light a fire? Definitely YES!!! Take it with a grain of salt and just enjoy it...if you're looking for facts, try public television.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Very Stupid !

The white woman who wrote this series is obviously a middle-age freak who discovered BBC about a dozen years ago and has switched her writings from BDSM and non-conscent to interracial.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
What a Mum and Cousin.

What a Mum lending her pussy to all the young boys

More stories like this PLEASE.

thebug37thebug37about 8 years ago
Hell's Bells

Gang bangs are a treat for most females. Want excitement, visit an On-Premise swingers club or have a GB at home. Watch your wife or GF take on seven guys and end up mounted nearly 48 times in her pussy. Nice stories, wish they were combined instead of one page at a time. You earned the highest rate. More cumming?

jenorma2012jenorma2012almost 8 years ago
no

do not continue it, this was bad from the start and it did not get any better, aunt lisa should have stopped it after the first one, and divorced her husband for setting up the 2nd rape

wanderinggipsywanderinggipsyabout 7 years ago
why not jimmy and his men gang start pimping as a profession, rather than be frustrated wannabe pimps?!;)

maybe if jimmy and his men(men? really?! serious doubts !!) gang started pimping as a profession, rather than wannabe pimping, they could be men enough to give their women a life,and a luxurious one!! ;)

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
5 Stars

What a Tramp!

Kuntkilla69Kuntkilla69about 6 years ago
Sluts

Really enjoyed these stories. Hope there is more to cum :). Love that forced sex. Really turned them out. Allison's mom needs to get raped next

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago

Hope Allison got pregnant too after her gangbang my friends and me got my mom and their moms too we gangbanged them against their will fuck one all day find out week later that 4 of them were pregnant with them getting gangbang they wouldn't know who the father was.there was one mother we got she had very large tits we gangbanged her real good 2 cocks in her cunt and one in her ass and in her mouth right down her throat when cum in her you could hear her scream with cock down her throat1st one to cum was down her throat once he pulled out of her mouth we fucked her so hard she started to cut and yell out bastards we made sure we held on to her when she was cumming all3 of us cum in her cunt and ass she was still cumming once she finished I grabbed her hair forced my cock down her throat she gagged told her your arse now 40 yr old mom turned into gangbang slut that gave us 4 kids another one on the way

DADDYLOVER2DADDYLOVER2almost 5 years ago

I WOULD HAVE LOVE TO BE THERE SND JOIN IN THE ACTION! DARE TO REPLY BACK?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

So did your cousin get knocked up me knocked up my mom aunt sister and two of my aunts daughters

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Hot for women like me with submissive streaks, but it all sounds very unrealistic.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

crap - each boy came 10 times - get real

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

When mom and cousin fucked all weekend hope they both got knocked up

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Please so more chapters. It is getting good

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Took my mom and aunt on vacation when got to resort there was one room left with king size bed nudist resort to my loolmked good nude extra large dark brown nipples I pushed her on her back got on top of her rammed my cock up in her she screamed out loud fuck your big just kept fucking her hard until told her your going to be carrying my kid in you even samething to my mom they both did pregnacy test my aunt called bastard told her you wanted get knocked up from different guys told her only black guys here there goal knock single or married woman every woman be at pool getting large cocks in them told both of them I entered both of you take on 20 guys each let them cum inside you my aunt yelled out there is no dam way let anybody fuck me except you I said good but for now you and mom are doing full hardcore gangbang and being filmed once we got to pool one woman was screaming had Tree extra large cocks in her cun one in her ass down her throat they all let loose inside her once done with her they picked her upyelling nomore her husband looked at her said you did good and she told him we are getting divorced said only guys going fuck me are black guys then said to him I am carrying black kid in me now

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Like story cousin didn't want to get pregnant hope did because I fucked my cousin got her pregnant both got married have three kids together both are parents found out my mom and aunt came over they talked to us saying they wanted me to knock them up my mom told my aunt you go first told them both strip down and to lay on floor in living room got undress raised my aunts legs up then rammed her hard screamed until she orgasmed hard put my sperm in like did my mom week later back over told us both had my kid in them then said to us both moving in with you two got bigger house now I fuck three woman even have are own orgy together

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

have CJ fuck the husband

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Have CJ fuck the husband into a sissy

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Like it aunt got knocked up then being gangbanged to niece being fucked gangbanged hope she got knocked up too

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

rubbish - ''each boy had cum 10 times'' yeah right

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Hope your mom and cousin did get knocked uo

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

stupid!

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Very hot. Have you written anything new or posted more elsewhere?

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Need a sequel with CJ fucking his sister Allison, maybe a threesome with the aunt or their mother.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Did your cousin have her kid yet or does she have couple of your kids

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