homeIncest/TabooThe Short Arm ExamPublic Comments

All Comments  for

The Short Arm Exam

byOldDog©
All
Comments (2)
by Anonymous

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by sexysmile07/09/08

Hot little story!

I liked it, but was distracted by multiple errors that could have easily been correctly by proofreading, including punctuation problems and skipped and misspelled words ("farted at a weeding"). Still, though, I liked it. The ending made me smile!

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous07/10/08

Seriously in need of an editor...

but your story was unique to say the least.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.

Click here to leave your own comment on this submission!  or
Back to The Short Arm Exam  or
More submissions by OldDog.

Add a
Comment

Post a public comment on this submission (click here to send private anonymous feedback to the author instead).

Post comment as (click to select):

You may also listen to a recording of the characters.

Preview comment

Forgot your password?

Please wait

Change picture

Your current user avatar, all sizes:

Default size User Picture  Medium size User Picture  Small size User Picture  Tiny size User Picture

You have a new user avatar waiting for moderation.

Select new user avatar:

   Cancel