She's Addictive Ch. 05

a bit rushed

I liked the story but it seemed like you tried to wrap it up too quick it seemed everything happend at once.I must admit im sad she died...im a sucker for a happy ending. i do hope u keep writing, its a learning process.Look forward to reading other stories

hmm ,

The story is generally good, but do a little research , for example the word "bigomist" is used incorrectly and how many college kids leaves college and makes 60,000 per year the first year?

Unexpected...

Never would have thought that the heroine would die. So bravo on the unexpected twist. Overall, this story had a good plot but a little more detail and character depth would've worked wonders. Keep it up :)

Good Read!

Although I wished for a happier ending, it is still a good story! Great job! A little advice, next time try to slow it down a bit, can't wait to read more from you!

Hott

this is one of the best story i read so far. Do a little more research on the word bigomist and you got it.

uhhh...say what?

She died?!?! I'm stunned!!! You had me up until that point and i feel like the ending totally killed me! but that does not change the fact that the story was great! not all stories have a happy ending its a part of life that we all just have to suck it up and deal with it! so...good work! I enjoyed it!

Loved it

I loved the story, not all endings are meant to be happy. Keep on doing your thing!

Damn!!!!!

This is one of the best and most sad stories I have ever read. How could she die when they finally got together? Its a damn shame certainly a reminder not to take life for granted. Damn!

=)

I don't care what anyone says, this is awesome. I get all teary eyed reading it. Please write a new story.

Wow

This was a really good story. You made me sad and proud at the same time. Please continue with your writing. Are you going to follow up with Cort in round two of falling in love?

Outstanding Story

I think this was an outstanding story. It's just too sad that Iliana did not get to live and enjoy her son.

Omg!!!!

Omgg, this story made me cry....so sad!!

wow

I started reading and couldnt stop. First story to make me cry. beautimous!!! Absolutely awesome!!!

Double Whammy

For him to lose his father, then his mother disowned him the day that he buried his father-yet gained his son, while losing the love of his life!!!
This is so realistic that it's almost scary...
Good story :>)

OMG!!!!!

Beautiful story...wonderfully written! I loved every line of it. Please do not stop writing you have a talent! I actually cried! I love the words on the tombstone "My Addiction". I would love to be called that!

Crying.....

I'm crying for what would of been such a beautiful and wonderful couple. To go through all that and then for love to be lost,I pray that most of us never find out what that's like.

Wow, This Is A Huge Shocker

Dang I feel so much for Cort, he truly and really did love Iliana and for her to be taken away. Whew! This story is fantastic, I loved every minute of it. But I do wished she would have survived and raised CJ as a family together.

Aww...

Sad ending, but at least he has his son to remember her by.

sad story

i really liked this story but i dont know what would i do if the same happens to me

rewrite!

It's not fair. And yea I know life's not fair but this is fiction and I want a new ending. She should have survived it's almost as if you're justifying the hate of the mother by killing her off. Their love deserved to be continued by two living people.

my heart stopped

When she died I almost cried; and I never cry.

I wish someone wrote a new ending to this story . I keep coming back hoping it will have changed .

whyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy

please write a new ending for this story........

I actually liked the ending, didn't see it coming