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Nicely Done
Always good to read a story from DG Hear. Never disappointed. I wouldn't mind a second chapter either.
Good story!
Is another chapter in the works?
Nice Story.
Good build up and the story was the perfect length. Although I don't think a second chapter is necessary, I liked the way it forced you to think about what would be happening. Thanks for another good read
Another Chapter
It is a good tale but seems unfinished. Needs 2 more chapters, one to elaborate on their relationship on the next night and then for the relationship to develop.
Please write more !!!
How about another chapter DG. Would like to see where you take us on this one.
Just In Time
Just when you think trailer trash has taken over this site a really good writer comes out with a story. So good I hope there is more. Thank you DG
Fine Romantic Story
It is a really a pleasure to read DG Hear three days in row.
We do have some very good writers hear and he is one of the best. Unfortunately some very good writers have left us. I am with Papa Toad on the vote that the story ended nicely and there is no need to draw it out.
Excellant
Would love to see this continued for another chapter or two.
You are one (of a very select few) of my favorite Lit. authors. I have read & re-read ALL of your submissions many times
You never disappoint
This was another well done, sweet little tale from one of the very best. I don't like the way someone described other contributors as trailer trash. If only "their" favorites submitted it would likely be be a lonely site. I applaud and thank every author who has been gracious enough to submit for our entertainment. If I don't enjoy their submittal or choose not to read it, that is my choice. There is no reason for the poison pen comments that so often appear when we don't like a tale or an ending. Thanks once again, D G.
A great addition to what I am calling a
"DG Hear week"! Lots of his truly entertaining stories to read. I am in awe of his imagination and story telling skills.
It needs more
Good characters, a good story, but it needs a sequel.
Another great story
As always very well written...A great storyline
I agree with adding a chapter or two with this.
What happens afterwards? Do they meet again?
Good story as usual, DG.
Regards, Jack
Great bootstraps story
Very good story particularly when someone pulls themselves up out of the potential gutter and succeds and is measured about his activities.
Smart people don't have to have a sheepskin to acheive success.
Very Very Nice Romance
I really liked this story - moved along nicely at a nice pace, erotic, and believable. Good work, DGH.
go for it ... or not
Hell, I'll join the chorus. Write another chapter and tell us how they fell in love and lived happily ever after. Or leave it alone and let it stand as is. Either way is good, but I really would like to see more of these two, simply because it would mean another DGH story for us all to enjoy. BTW, I didn't get a chance to tell you how much I enjoyed Detroit City. It was really good.
This Story Begs For a Romantic Follow-Up
In keeping with a lot of your stories, I liked this theme. I would dearly love to see a continuation.
Nice!
A fun story well told! I would like a continuation, but won't complain if you don't. Hope it does well in the contest!
good setup for a wonderful romantic change in life
Ok DG, you painted yourself into a corner! The vast majority say give us more so I’m joining the chorus! Please let us see how this man of tough upbringing goes on with his outlook and living of life. Thank you for the good entertainment With respectPT
DG Hear
I'm reserving the right whether or not to continue the story. I have some ideas but first I want to see how the readers react to this chapter.
It takes time for me to write a story with good characters. If I do write more to this story it would be at least a week or two to get it posted. This contest submission date ends Friday the 11th. No way could I write, have it edited and submitted by then.
It will take a week from submission to posting after Friday. So, don't look for anything soon. Thanks you all for your comments and votes. It's really much appreciated.
DG Hear
Please continue!
A lovely story-I'd like to hear how it comes out.
Resort
This sweet story starts off like it's all going to be about mindless orgy stuff. But the intro about the hero's past life sets up a really fine adult love story -- VERY satisfying for adults, not teenagers! Thank you for this excellent tale.
Oh, No!
Oh, no, baby! Don't stop now!
This is a story worth reading!
Not just a wham bam story where the man has his brain imbedded in his cock. This guy has a brain and a heart not just a dick! Please, continue.
Well done, DG. I liked the traditional attitude of the character.
Come up with a followup, perhaps similar to the Hart to Hart tv series in the 70s (?). Something where the two continue in some sort of shared life.
Good luck.
I liked it as it is...but
I think it would be fun to read the rest of their story, should you ever choose to write one. I think I agree with Jake Rivers and PAPATOAD! How is that for confusing? Thanks as always, D.G.
nice
nice flow to it..
I agree with previous comment 100% .
Actually this is more than nice. Superb story written by a Master Wordsman. Thank you DG.
A NUDE DAY CELEBRATION FULLY CLOTHED
but looking and hoping, TK U MLJ LV NV
Great counterpoint -
Good people again - it is a bad habit you have - heh
Needs a Finish
Good story. What happens? They have/had feeling for each other...
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