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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous07/11/08

I loved the party!

I would have loved to be at your party !!

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by Anonymous06/22/09

i bet its delicious

ever since i read that the first winner of american idol said she peed in the showeri have wished i could be there, glue my mouth to her pussy and drink every delicious drop. hopefully this would make her cum and iwould suck and swallow every drop.

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by Anonymous04/12/12

A sad old man wrote this

Anyone who thinks a woman wrote this is out of their tree.

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by Anonymous05/30/13

Junk

Terrible story.. I can only assume this was written by a pubescant boy.

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by Anonymous05/26/14

rough

That was horrible and that was torcherous to that woman

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by Anonymous07/25/15

1600 WORDS - 18+ MISTAKES

1. whore give it away (gives)
2. going to the local sym (gym)
3. do the stair master (StairMaster)
4. Once I get home I go to my web site (website)
5. special requests, or any pressing maters. (matters)
6. anything else she want (wants)
7. I am a Piss Whore and his is my 21st birthday adventure." (piss whore) (this)
8. my ass whole (asshole)
9. garter belt and fish net stockings. (fishnet)
10. I told (him)not to clean the men's room
11. and to hang (an) out of order on all but one of his stalls.
12. be the bars fuck toy (bar’s)
13. When he filially finished (finally)
14. I could only imagine how this would fill. (feel)
15. bitch hit my pussy has hard (as)
16. The first 15 was bad but the last 15 blacked me out. (were)
17/ fat ass on my face and not let me breath (breathe)
18. my as was taken by every man in the bar (ass)

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by 1970man06/29/16

mistakes rejoinder

Yeah, it was only an okay story, but 3 of anonymous' 18 mistake notes were debatable.

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