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by WickedEve07/12/08

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I like how some of your words skidded into each other. :)

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by KOLKORE07/14/08

Good to go for the masses

For me, it was a pleasure to see you allowing yourself to play around, presumably not too worried here about presenting as 'edgy' or speaking the latest poetic short hand lingo. This poem on the other hand, was flowing effortlessly, happy and playful (despite the subject) and I enjoyed it for it.

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