Good one Jack, or course I wouldn't expect anything less from one of the best. I like everyone else is waiting for the next chapter. Thanks for being part of the invitaional.
With respect
DG Hear
so far... Jack is one of the best and we can be sure that quality will be maintained. Funny detail, I graduated from High School in 1955, so I know what the lady is talking about!
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Great start, Jack!
Fascinating beginning - looking forward to the finish.
Thanks for participating!
Regards, Jack
nice start!
very well written. good character development. next chapter please.
Great Start
Nice warmup and very realistic. I can feel her pains!
Looking good.
Looking forward to seeing where this goes. Interesting start. Thanks for the post.
Good Start
Don't you just hate it when you have to wait for the second shoe to drop. Thanks for the anticipation.
Great Beggining!
Good one Jack, or course I wouldn't expect anything less from one of the best. I like everyone else is waiting for the next chapter. Thanks for being part of the invitaional.
With respect
DG Hear
So far
a story told well. Looking forward to the next installment.
Good Story
so far... Jack is one of the best and we can be sure that quality will be maintained. Funny detail, I graduated from High School in 1955, so I know what the lady is talking about!
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