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Battle of Wills Ch. 03

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by Anonymous07/17/08

Too short!

Nice series so far, but this part seems rushed and therefore less satisfying. Keep up the effort!

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by ArrowDel07/21/08

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It was rushed actually...I needed something to get her into the room for the next bit to work...which I hope turns out better than it sounded to myself a few minutes ago before I submitted it. :/

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