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Excellent
Very well done. Vivid imagery with every character seeming alive and believable. Just a great story all the way including a beautiful ending.
Great story
Absolutely loved it. Excellent writing style that made all my senses come alive.
Bloody Good!
I don't know what to say! First Passagiatta and now this? I laughed 'till I nearly pissed my pants. I thought I was reading Dan Jenkins again. Bravo, as usual.
Coaster
rascal
who are you? I think I just fell in love with you.
Through My Memory
That was sooo good that it hurts inside right now, a great story, unbelievedly well written!! A third of the way through the first page, I just KNEW that you were going to duck the job, take off up through Durango, and Delta, go by Paonia, over McClure Pass, leave your dust in Marble, drive the 6&1/2 miles of that Godforsaken and wonderfully Godblessed road to Crystal, stop right below the last little hump in the road into town, and take the undoubted, absolutely, without argument, best pictures ever taken of the thousands done of the Old Crystal Mill It would have been the evening light when you got there, and you would have caught all of the shadows and last dapplings of sunlight that would have brought out all the storied glory of her past and the beauty of her lasting (with the Neals' help). BUT, your story was even better than my memory. Thanks!!!
Hit Don't Git Much Better - KUDO's Author
This is your knight job rite?
There are adjectives but not enough space - so thanks and please send more - soon.
With Extremely High Regard
Great
Another winner!
Boyd
That's what love does to a guy....
Makes you think all sorts of irrational thoughts. Challenges your sanity and ability to think straight. The ability to reason is long gone. Then when you see her and she kisses you and tells you that she loves you, the world is good and nothing can go wrong! Ah, love! What she does to you!
Outstanding writing
Thank you for a marvelous story, well told.
You can
write some really funny shit when you want to. Still poignant, and romantic, and even heart stopping, But, I do appreciate your sense of irony and humor. cheese dick. I love it.........
Loved it
Good descriptions!
Bloody good story. Well-told and quirky, with a proper end.
Thank You
HP
Short and Very Sweet
I raced along with the author as he went through this story and loved it. Since our hero had known Mindy for quite a while I was surprised at how little he knew about her. I guess the international journalist set is big enough for people to coexist without knowing each other at all well. All the details don't really make much difference as the gist of the story was two people striking a chord and making it work. I would have given it a 5*, but Leverkuhn doesn't seem to like the rating system.
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