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My Wife's Cousin Ch. 01

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by lesliejones07/18/08

enjoyed this

i liked the easy way you got this story going and started slowly developing the characters while the action moved too. you have a nice way of telling the tale.

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by Anonymous07/18/08

Very nice!

Nicely done. Good lead in and left us hanging for the next!

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by Anonymous07/19/08

OnIy 1 thing was wrong...

...U used the phrase, "...like a pro...". Who really knows WHAT a professional prostitute WOULD DO? Maybe she likes her chosen profession? Maybe she's got the rent to pay(duh). Maybe she's a nympho. Maybe she prefers blow-jobs to straight fucks. Maybe she's a dyke? Who knows but I do know 1 thing, if you've got any kind of class at all, YOU WON'T ASK HER!

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by Scotsman6904/26/12

Waist, not waste

Otherwise, fine writing.

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