Just a note to let you know how much I enjoyed reading your little story. I found it tight and compact, you moved through it quickly, but still manage to delivere the money shot.
Deliciously anonymous and wanton... I agree, the only thing that could make it better would be someone there to watch them... nicely written, as always.
This was HOT! The urgent, fast, needy sex always has a place in my fantasies! Very sexy especially all the kissing...that always does it for me and so many stories don't focus on that as much as I would like!
After the awesome feedback you gave me on my story, I had to read some of yours! And wow! This is the first one I've read, but what can I say... it was HOT, it was NAUGHTY, but there was still a certain tenderness in there and just the right amount of foreplay to build up the anticipation. Loved how you went down on her afterwards! (That's the bit that really did it for me btw - sooooooo hot!) The random anonymity of it was very powerful too; even the most respectable of us feels the urge to let out hair down (and our mother's down!) every once in a while. Excellently written Ross, well done 5/5 from me :)
Love the arousing descriptions you use--really painting pictures with your phrases. Very hot pictures, I might add. Love your stories and your poems because you include lots of detail, and yet it is easy to fill in the voids with my imagination.
I'm all a tingle thinking about sex in a public place and not even knowing their name! as always your writing is so hot that I can picture myself being right there in the alley!
luci xxx
Love your writing . . . enough detail to set the scene and enough connection to make the sex emotionally and physically fullfilling. While I have never fantasized about being taken in a public place by a willing stranger, this story made me wonder if I need to be more open to something like that :-).
English
so hot..
You know how much I love this story already. It was so perfect the other night when I just needed something short and sweet to get me going.
Lust...
...is wonderful, isn't it?
Well done!
Hi Ross,
Just a note to let you know how much I enjoyed reading your little story. I found it tight and compact, you moved through it quickly, but still manage to delivere the money shot.
Look forward to reading more of you.
Hmmm....
Deliciously anonymous and wanton... I agree, the only thing that could make it better would be someone there to watch them... nicely written, as always.
Woof!
Rang my bell, pressed my buzzer. I felt like it was written just for me. Thanks!
passion
ross
i found this story to be wonderfully written and quite moving. thank you for sharing it with the world.
yours, sandy
power
i loved the way you captured the power of the moment
Loved, loved, loved this story. No character buildup was necessary for me. Tonight I was the woman in this story! Thank you!
Hey Ross
This was HOT! The urgent, fast, needy sex always has a place in my fantasies! Very sexy especially all the kissing...that always does it for me and so many stories don't focus on that as much as I would like!
Good job! I am glad I stopped by.
Worked for me :)
Loved it!
After the awesome feedback you gave me on my story, I had to read some of yours! And wow! This is the first one I've read, but what can I say... it was HOT, it was NAUGHTY, but there was still a certain tenderness in there and just the right amount of foreplay to build up the anticipation. Loved how you went down on her afterwards! (That's the bit that really did it for me btw - sooooooo hot!) The random anonymity of it was very powerful too; even the most respectable of us feels the urge to let out hair down (and our mother's down!) every once in a while. Excellently written Ross, well done 5/5 from me :)
Hugs,
Linda_Lee :)
xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Hot casual sex
Love the arousing descriptions you use--really painting pictures with your phrases. Very hot pictures, I might add. Love your stories and your poems because you include lots of detail, and yet it is easy to fill in the voids with my imagination.
mmmmmmmm...
To be taken from behind in a semi-public place....mmmmmmmmm!
To just close your eyes, lean your head back and just...feel!
MMMMMMM!!!
I'm all a tingle thinking about sex in a public place and not even knowing their name! as always your writing is so hot that I can picture myself being right there in the alley!
luci xxx
Very hot
Love your writing . . . enough detail to set the scene and enough connection to make the sex emotionally and physically fullfilling. While I have never fantasized about being taken in a public place by a willing stranger, this story made me wonder if I need to be more open to something like that :-).
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