by GratefulFred
Really laid the story out well and gave me a smile at the end. Would you know if going to my 20th year high school reunion count as disrupting the time line?
Even leaving out the time travel aspects, the whole thing was simply not credible. The writing was pedestrian at best, there was no setup, and then that horribly jarring shift into present tense at the end.<p>The author could benefit from an editor.
Kind of a new twist on auto-fellatio! Is it technically incest to fuck yourself up the ass???
LOL- nice little bit of work!!!!