I enjoyed this story. But I think that you need to add a few more chapters of Lisa's adventures in the world of porn.
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Anonymous07/20/08
super
kablam ytou hit it rate on the head it was awesome
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Anonymous07/25/08
Hot the way they all cummed
What I loved was the way he made her cum several times but didn't cum in her. Instead, he pulled out and jerked off all over her belly and the guy watching and jerking off cummed also while she watched them boht jerk off. This was definitely a story worth more than 100 points.
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Anonymous08/05/08
Great Pornography
When I read the first two paragraphs I knew I was going to enjoy this story and the line--"had'nt been fucked in over a week and was going crazy" really hit home. Reading the story did'nt get me fucked but it got me off twice and that helped me retain my sanity till I did get laid.
This author is a really talented pornographer and can be proud of that ability to give pleasure to her readers.
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Anonymous03/15/10
babe!
Christ I loved this story! Me and Vince however had to be content with cumming on our own.
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Need to continue
I enjoyed this story. But I think that you need to add a few more chapters of Lisa's adventures in the world of porn.
super
kablam ytou hit it rate on the head it was awesome
Hot the way they all cummed
What I loved was the way he made her cum several times but didn't cum in her. Instead, he pulled out and jerked off all over her belly and the guy watching and jerking off cummed also while she watched them boht jerk off. This was definitely a story worth more than 100 points.
Great Pornography
When I read the first two paragraphs I knew I was going to enjoy this story and the line--"had'nt been fucked in over a week and was going crazy" really hit home. Reading the story did'nt get me fucked but it got me off twice and that helped me retain my sanity till I did get laid.
This author is a really talented pornographer and can be proud of that ability to give pleasure to her readers.
babe!
Christ I loved this story! Me and Vince however had to be content with cumming on our own.
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