This is a great start! You've left me excited! Please hurry with more!
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Anonymous07/21/08
Turns Me On!!!!!!
Great story cant wait for the next chapter!!Can relate to this in real life as I wanted to do my gf's sister several years ago never did happen boo hoo.
Keep writing and I will keep reading n enjoying,you have a nack for stories I can relate too.
jentvcd.
This is supposed to be a fantasy site, but the editorial staff are turning it more and more into an entrance exam. Being English I tend to place a lot of adlib comments inside quotes, for in England it helps the flow, but these American editors only know their form of english, even as I write their dictionary cannot tell the difference between senses.
Keep it going please, forget the assholes.
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Anonymous08/02/08
your story got me off
your story was Great baby... I read it 3 times while I was jacking off... ty for making me feel so good... :-)
wow what a fantastic hot story . reading this i was there watching as your in law sisters husband get to fuck you for that first time . love it . can't wait to read more .
brilliant writing.
English
Great job again! Hurry with more chapters!
This is a great start! You've left me excited! Please hurry with more!
Turns Me On!!!!!!
Great story cant wait for the next chapter!!Can relate to this in real life as I wanted to do my gf's sister several years ago never did happen boo hoo.
Keep writing and I will keep reading n enjoying,you have a nack for stories I can relate too.
jentvcd.
very hot!
Keep it going please. The rest if you critical assholes get a life. Its not a fucking English exam its a sex story!
Hot...Hot...Hot
Well said MsDaienKnight in Louisiana
This is supposed to be a fantasy site, but the editorial staff are turning it more and more into an entrance exam. Being English I tend to place a lot of adlib comments inside quotes, for in England it helps the flow, but these American editors only know their form of english, even as I write their dictionary cannot tell the difference between senses.
Keep it going please, forget the assholes.
your story got me off
your story was Great baby... I read it 3 times while I was jacking off... ty for making me feel so good... :-)
your story got me off
your story was Great baby... I read it 3 times while I was jacking off... ty for making me feel so good... :-)
Continue please
Since it said that this was Ch. 1, then that means that there will be more soon. I hope you write more of this story.
Where?
Where, oh where, is the promised Ch. 02?
An awesome very hot horny story
wow what a fantastic hot story . reading this i was there watching as your in law sisters husband get to fuck you for that first time . love it . can't wait to read more .
brilliant writing.
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