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And then out of nowhere comes that line about death row. It makes the reader stop and pause and consider. Such an innocent way to make the reader pause to think.
Mental tactile
I like the image in this one, good title by the way, NJ. I thought it was rich, the words and texture, and mental shadow and light play, the ending made me feel unexpectedly sad.
a touching disclosure
Once I figured out (as I believe I have ), the second stanza hit me pretty hard. Even as you develop the main image, you also create a contrast between yourself and the initial natural event. The contrast continues to be built to the most stiking ending. It's one of the most touching self disclosures I have read. Perhaps that was the reason for the hidden - veiled language used.
why?
This one id not get an E is beyond me. What a shame such a great poem goes unnoticed. So much jealousy o this site is unbecoming to so-called enlightened "artists."
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