Its good to see you posted some of this story .. But I must say Im dissapointed .. I was waiting much more aggressive chapter .. Anyways post more soon Please :)Good job
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Anonymous07/23/08
Beautiful!
I can't wait to read more and follow Ana and Sean's story to the end! I've said it, others have said it, you must be know it: you are so talented with stringing words together. You wrote beautifully and I'm soooo glad Sean came back at the very end to be with Ana.
Update when you have a chance. I and your many other devotees will be waiting! As always thank you for writing. X
by
Anonymous07/23/08
You have a very poetic style of writing
and even though there is not too much of the plot unfolding in this section, I think we see some essential character development, especially from Simon. Worth reading as always.
like the fact that it wasn't over the top drama. It was realistic and sweet and it gave us a chance to see the characters unfold (especially happy we got to really meet Simon and I love the way the chapter ended). Well done, August. You didn't disappoint me in the least, and I'm looking forward to the next chapter! :)
Keep at it ... you are a great writer and story teller. I read through all 8 chapters today because once I started I did not want to stop. A great balance of romance, angst, and of course sex ... great, hot sex between two not so perfect adults. I hope there is more coming on this story and that you continue writing after this story is done.
by
Anonymous07/24/08
I just came across this today
and read all 8 chapters too!! I couldn't tear myself away from it after I read the first one. Now I'm sitting here dying for MORE!!!!!!!!! Love the characters and story. You are an amazing writer. Can't wait for the next one! :)
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Anonymous07/25/08
You made my Wednesday
Right on time. I just love this story. I daresay you are one of the handful best writers on this site. This story just feels so warm, cosy, and real. Oh and did I tell you I read the whole 8 chapters over again for like 3 times now? Now all I have to do is to get myself a Sean... Please don't keep us hanging for long. Keep us posted on when the next one is coming!
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Anonymous07/27/08
More, More, More!!
Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeease tell me that there are more chapters in the works. I read all 8 today and loved them! This is the best I have read on this site.
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Anonymous07/31/08
İs There More ???
Please .. Post Moreeeeeeeeeee
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Anonymous08/03/08
Why Dont You Post ????? offf
POST moree please.. Im dying to know wht happens next ...
English
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Its good to see you posted some of this story .. But I must say Im dissapointed .. I was waiting much more aggressive chapter .. Anyways post more soon Please :)Good job
Beautiful!
I can't wait to read more and follow Ana and Sean's story to the end! I've said it, others have said it, you must be know it: you are so talented with stringing words together. You wrote beautifully and I'm soooo glad Sean came back at the very end to be with Ana.
Update when you have a chance. I and your many other devotees will be waiting! As always thank you for writing. X
You have a very poetic style of writing
and even though there is not too much of the plot unfolding in this section, I think we see some essential character development, especially from Simon. Worth reading as always.
I, for one,
like the fact that it wasn't over the top drama. It was realistic and sweet and it gave us a chance to see the characters unfold (especially happy we got to really meet Simon and I love the way the chapter ended). Well done, August. You didn't disappoint me in the least, and I'm looking forward to the next chapter! :)
So, so good
Keep at it ... you are a great writer and story teller. I read through all 8 chapters today because once I started I did not want to stop. A great balance of romance, angst, and of course sex ... great, hot sex between two not so perfect adults. I hope there is more coming on this story and that you continue writing after this story is done.
I just came across this today
and read all 8 chapters too!! I couldn't tear myself away from it after I read the first one. Now I'm sitting here dying for MORE!!!!!!!!! Love the characters and story. You are an amazing writer. Can't wait for the next one! :)
You made my Wednesday
Right on time. I just love this story. I daresay you are one of the handful best writers on this site. This story just feels so warm, cosy, and real. Oh and did I tell you I read the whole 8 chapters over again for like 3 times now? Now all I have to do is to get myself a Sean... Please don't keep us hanging for long. Keep us posted on when the next one is coming!
More, More, More!!
Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeease tell me that there are more chapters in the works. I read all 8 today and loved them! This is the best I have read on this site.
İs There More ???
Please .. Post Moreeeeeeeeeee
Why Dont You Post ????? offf
POST moree please.. Im dying to know wht happens next ...
Exceptional...I'm Hooked...
Can't you tell?
glad things are moving forward for them
there's nothing quite like thinking you've lost it all to find out how much it can really mean.
well done on so many fronts.
U rock!!!
Please come back u r very talented. Glad Sean came back, the power of love.... Dat has me up past midnight trying to finish all d chapters lol
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