Falling Into Darkness Ch. 15

LOVE this story.

I never usually leave comments on stories I read on here but I just HAVE to with this story because it is by far the best material I've read on this site. It's so beautifully written and I love the characters - I fell in love with this story from the first chapter and every subsequent chapter has just got better! Please, please update soon.

Fantastic story

I think this story is great Ihave stayed up late and lost sleep to keep reading it.Can't wait for more.

Keep it up

Please keep writing... I know this is recent but I just love your work and want to read more!!

Yup!

I am SO wrapped up in this story! I really like that Anna is a good friend... but then we already knew this! Thank you for contributing such a well-written and entertaining story. As usual, I am looking forward to another installment!

Totally addicted!

Oh my gosh, I started reading Falling Into Darkness last night. Unfortunately, I started reading it WAY late, so I just finished the 15th chapter tonight and I find myself longing for more!!! I can't wait for the rest, and I fear I've turned into a nerd who will be checking every evening for a new chapter! haha

Best story yet!!!!!!!!

OMG I love this story and can't get enough. I found it yesterday evening and just couldn't stop reading it. You are very very talented. This story had me on the edge of my seat for most of the night. I am a big Laurell K. Hamilton fan and I will tell you this, this story is as good if not better than anything she has wrote to date. So please keep it coming, I can't wait to read more. Love it,Love it, Love it.

PUHLEASE Write More

This series is by far the best I've read on here! I can't wait for your next installment, please don't let your muse rest!

MY GOD!!!

I love it! Your story is mature,romantic and sexy. You applied every single layer evenly and perfectly.

You are a brilliant writer!

Infact I'm going to send this link to one of my close friends as we speak.

:) Please up date soon.

More! More!

Please write more! Your stories are such a good read. Great plot and characters!

My God

Absolutely captivating story. I stayed up until 4 a.m. last night reading it. Please tell me there's going to be a happy ending! I'm definitely going to be keeping track of this one.

Move up!

You have true talent. Expand the ideas and write a steamy novel. You'd do great I just know it. This is absolutely one of the best submissions I've read on literotica and I want to see more! Waiting for Ch. 16!! We're all impatient, but don't rush. Inspiration gets cranky when rushed.

Love it!

Love what you are doing with the story and I can not wait to read more.

More

More more more...please more? I wanna know what happens!!!

damn!

I read the whole thing in less than 24 hours.
excellent!
please take a week or two off work anjd finish it.

Phwoar.

This is my first time on Literotica, and yours is the first story I've read. Me and all my girlfriends are reading 'Falling Into Darkness', and even a guy friend or two :)
Keep up the fantastic work, my friend that introduced me said it was her favourite on the site

Why should every chapter have sex?

I love this story! You keep apologizing when there's a chapter with no sex, but to me, the plot is far more important. Thankfully, this story has a wonderful plot!

Don't apologize,

Don't apologize for having no sex. While it's true that a lot of people come here for the sex (and I was one of them at first), the development in stories like yours make the stories amazing. I'm reading all of your stories, whether they have sex in them or not.

I usually love Cael but right now he's an asshole who needs an attitude adjustment, keep the good work up, if a story makes you yell at a character through your comp. then you know that it's a good story. I like seeing multiple sides of characters, it makes them seem more real. - the critic

disappointed in Alexander

he knows her better than all that. knows she'd stand by mara. knows she can't feel forced by his power like he started to do....so disappointed in him...he knows her better than that.

i know lots of people read these stories for the sex, but i really like the plot!

i'm a little conflicted as to whether or not Cael would realistically react like that to Anna in their dream... :D still aewsome!

by the time i get to the end of this series, it'd better have a happy ending! EMPHASIS ON ENDING! I HATE CLIFFHANGERS!RAWR!

fishing author

Author, your stories are entertaining and well written,but the continued post scripts attached to your stories are annoying and tiresome... Save your comments for the comment section or one on one emails.

Geez Cael - how do you say snob?

I'm a little disappointed in Cael's character (development?). For someone who earlier grieved that he had left Anna for dead, his character seems too snobby regarding Mara and too quick to judge her. Considering that he was so kind before, it doesn't seem to fit - even with his current emotional state. He doesn't seem to want to even take into account that not only did Mara save Anna's life but that she acted as her guardian and helped her to start living her life as a vampire so that she could survive. It just doesn't make sense that his character would respond this way - just my opinion. It seems he'd be exceedingly grateful to Mara and would be looking for ways to help her out of her current situation. This aspect of the character is disturbing and very ugly. Even Darian pointed out that she had saved Anna's life, when Cael had referred to her as a criminal. I'm glad that Anna's character is staying loyal to her friend Mara who really needs help right now.

I can't believe I've held my toungue until now.......

I know as well as the next girl that men are stupid when they're thinking with the wrong head but did you have to do that here. If anything he probably owes Mara more than he owes Anna, but I guess it wouldn't make for much of a good read if logic ruled. Fabulous story I'm so glad it's been finished I'm sure I would have torn my hair out a few times if I had had to wait for chapters to be completed as it stands I have no nails left. ;-D

Thank you!!!

I agree

I agree I don't like this current development with Cael but I also kno that u will make him make up for it. What's a good story without some bad sides life isn't all good and happy I find this side side of Cael rather realistic even if I don't like it. And as for anonymous bitchin about the author leaving messages at the end of a chap I rather enjoy it. I like that she takes the time to comment to her fans. Keep it up Elle

hmm...

This was sad but I do like how Anna stands up for her friend. I like her character development.

I am also regretting reading this before bed. I'm hoping visions of Paulo don't haunt me. lol

I've read this story ten months ago and I am still holding my breath rereading it.
Good job!

Even though this is Literotica...

There are many wonderful stories on there that don't have sex in every chapter. You're writing a wonderful story and though the sex scenes are hot, it's the storyline that keeps me and many others coming back for more. Great job.

An incredible story

I am practically devouring this amazing story you have created!
i still have a few more chapters to read tho and will get on to them in just a little bit.
I do not even care if theres no sex scenes from here on out, the plot itself is what really makes a story, and you are a fantastic story teller.

Keep it up

Wonderful!

Just to preface, I've read through your story a couple of times now (revisiting certain chapters here and there). Your writing style is awesome! You do a good job of conveying everything and you've got some really great relationships built between your characters :)

I just wanted to note something small that caught my attention: Cael says that she has a "vapid" tongue, but vapid actually means dull, unchallenging, or uninteresting. Pretty sure based on context you meant something a little different ;) Perhaps saying she has a "sharp" tongue would fit better?

Well done

An excellent crossroads, such a choice, but Anna is such an amazing friend!

hot

love it.

damnd

this paola guy seems to be realy powerful. hopefully the both girls can get some assist from an ancient one. otherwise they are in big trouble.

5 stars.

Where Did You Go???

The story is great as we all know. I am reading it for the first time and have not commented for a few chapters now. But, I must tell you that it is disturbing reading the story and knowing that you have disappeared from your readers for nearly 5 years now. Your comments after each great chapter to your readers would indicate that you enjoy, or enjoyed, interacting with us. Sadly your disappearance would seem to indicate that you are no longer among us. If that is so, I feel sure that you knew how much your craft was loved.

I wonder if you wrote the story with the intent to make some of us to purposely hate the male protagonist. I feel like everything about him is too ideal, too perfect and it annoys me. It annoys me that he never listens to what Ana has to say, he's never truly loved her, Anna rescued him and he keeps on failing her. Instead of doing his hardest to find her, he wants her to come to him. I also think he only wants her cuz she's his mate , otherwise he doesn't fucking appreciate her. He's supposed to be likeable but I really just think he's a self entitled asshole and I would rather see Anna end up with Mara because they'd Make a nice lesbian couple, but that's just me. And even Kieran too, I find him to be more likeable than Cael honestly.