While it was right along with the quality I've come to expect from you.. it almost bordered more on erotic horror. The rape scene made me cry, and when the child came to the door.. well the Mama in me almost made me stop reading. I may be the only one that feels this way but please warn us in the future if its going to be that intense. I just happened to check for this latest update to your storyline right before going to bed, and while you usually ilicit sexual excitement, I find myself dreading sleep, that I may find a nightmare of murdered children waiting for me. If I had known, I would have saved this chapter for daylight hours.
I loved it as always and the sex though spicing things up is not essential. But... I wished those two would be with each other again i swear it's almost nerve wrecking to have them walk around in neverending circles!!!
...and very good. This story has much depth, and definately needs to be told! Keep going pleeeeeeease!! lol
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Anonymous07/23/08
amazing
I have been reading this series and I am hooked and can't get enough of it. I do wish that the chapters were a bit longer but they are very well written and leave me on my toes wanting the next chapter to be posted. I check every day to see and I read the others over till the next one is done I am really looking forward to the next one keep up the good work.
It's not all about sex. It's not really about the sex at all. You have written a truly gripping story here. The sex makes it better, but it's not what makes it great. I find myself marvelling at how you come up with the little details, like Alexander reading the reports about vampire murders. It's things like that that make your story incredibly rich and detailed. Keep up the good work.
The plot is what's got me hooked and the writing style, not the sex parts (not that the sex is not yummy). Truly addictive. This is the first thing I check every morning. I'm itching for the part where the girls will be sighted by the manhunt. And I agree with the previous comment that Mara should have someone (perhaps Kieran *wink wink*). But of course I'm happy with anything you come up with. Keep it up! Kudos!
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Anonymous07/23/08
Incredible!! Keep the story going!!
You have such a gift for storytelling, please keep going. Each chapter--sex or not--leaves this reader salivating for more. I love the tension between Cael and Anna right now. Please let your diehard fans know when you'll be posting again.
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Anonymous07/23/08
excellent
I agree with everyone else, its not all about sex. i'd rather read an intense story than one diluted by nothing but sex,especially a great story such as this one. i'm hooked and can't wait for the next installment .. great job!
by
Anonymous07/23/08
LOve it
You are such a good writer!! Absolutely glued to your stories. Not everything is always about sex. The plot, the flow.. Gosh... perfect
by
Anonymous07/23/08
;~;
D: I neeeeeeed more!
Please hurry on the next chapter.
Can you make it 3 pages next time?
Please?
For your loyal fans!
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Anonymous07/23/08
Love it!
Love it! Please more! This story is getting good! Cant wait! Thanks!!
You are an incredible, gifted writer. It doesn't matter about the sex...life, it seems even a vampire's life, isn't always about sex. Your story is riveting. I don't want to turn the page, I want to devour the BOOK! And maybe see the movie someday....I don't mind how much time it takes, you write quality...anyone can turn out crap...but this is a real story and you seriously need to find an agent...quit your job and write.
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Anonymous07/23/08
fantastic work
hey elianna! another great chapter.leaves me panting for more.wish you had more time to write and that way we would get more out of you but oh well! can't really complain.
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Anonymous07/23/08
gah. I'm going to boycot literotica
...at least until this story is done...that way I don't end up checking obsessively.
You're evil. But at least you're using your talent for powers of good? or something.
For yet another marvelous chapter. Everyone who has a well-paying publisher, send 'em Ellianna's way will ya? That quitting job and writing non-stop suggestion was a pretty good idea :)
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Anonymous07/23/08
ooohhhh thumbs up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!hmmm...hopefully it will be a beginning for new love story...kieran&mara???
by
Anonymous07/23/08
please
i have been with ya since the begining and i'm here till the end..just one thing..please dont end this with them just seeing each other again..we need a last love scene between them that isnt just a dream... i wish it would go on forever but i understand you have other stories to write..and im a fan for them as well...but i've totally fallen in love with these guys. Thanks for creating such a wonderful tale...
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Anonymous07/23/08
Enjoying the fall into darkness,
these two women "on the road" and the solidarity they develop.
Please write more soon !
Seriously I look forward to every chapter, I keep checking to see if it has been posted yet. Every chapter in the entire story has not let me down, and they all keep me at the edge of my seat!!
as always. I just wish he hadn't been so harsh with her. He should have told her he loved her right away before he looses the chance again! The scene with the family was hard to read, especially when the child walked in. But your writing is amazing. Please don't make us wait too long.
Yes it is true that there wasnt any sex scenes in this chapter...but who cares! lol. Yes of course we want the hot and sexy parts, but you need to have some chapters like this to makea great story. I think it was a key part for the chapter to be like this.
I really do hope that some how Alexander can help Mara out, so that Anna and him can finally be together! Please hurry with the next chapter. Dont take too long :) lol
You will never know how happy it makes me to see that there is a new chapter posted. Great writing as always. You know how to keep the suspense going amazingly well. Good luck on 16.
Thank you for listening to your fans and not abandoning your story! Guess what?! Your chapters are hot even without the sex scenes! Judy goes to show you that your talent supercedes even our expectations of what is usually posted on this sight! You have breathed life into the characters and have enchanted me with the depths of the characters! Whatever you do, don't stop because you do it well!!!
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Anonymous07/24/08
Omg i luv you!
I love this series so muc i want them together so bad!
Good for Anna. I'm glad she's not a pushover, even when she's confused. And I'm surprised that Cael isn't willing to bend the rules for her. She's only going to resist if he's possessive or if he tries to take without giving anything. Well, I can't wait to see where you take the story next!
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Anonymous07/24/08
awesome awesome awesome
15 chapters in and I still can't wait for the net.
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Anonymous07/24/08
You've got TALENT!!!
I liked this chapter, not a lot of sexuality but the characters are evolving and you feel apart of their angry and confusion.
You have an awesome talent and are definitely going to be one of my favourites.
Chapter 15 finally made it up. No sex, so what? and frankly I don't care. I loved it and the story just keeps getting better and better. I actually wanted to grab Paolo and stake him in the sun somewhere in the Sahara Desert. Could you make the next chapter a little longer? Pretty pleeeaase... Hmmm, Mara and Kieran? Now that would be fireworks worth seeing. Anyway, keep up the good work and I'm seriously hoping the next chapter gets put up sooner than later.
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Anonymous07/24/08
This is SO GOOD, I'm tingling all over !!
No sex, WHO CARES??! You've got tslent,snd the plot is so good,right now sex isn't needed.I cannot wait for the next few chapters, she should rock!
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Anonymous07/24/08
Loved It!!! Can't wait for more
just coming into this after a members search early this morning...read straight through chapters 1 thru 15...can't wait for the next installment.
by
Anonymous07/24/08
LOVED IT
I'm truly grateful that you've continued the series even with a busy lifestyle. Thank you so much!
by
Anonymous07/24/08
Excellent
I read chapter 1 through to 15 this morning, fantastic!! I can't wait for the next chapter! Oh, and by the way - I would buy the book!!! or books as the case may be - I can see you developing the characters and plot into a series of books. Right up there with Christine Feehan.
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Anonymous07/24/08
OMFG great story I want more.
I just started reading this story and all I want is more your such a great author I love it. ^_^ Please hurry up I want it to end yet I don't .
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Anonymous07/25/08
please....more
I'm kinda praying that you'll decide on a weekend to just do nothing but write. I'm sure a lot of us would spend a weekend just reading it. Keep em coming.
-J
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Anonymous07/26/08
KEEP WRITING!!!!!!!!!
Lady this story is so good it does not need gratuituos sex to get me to read it. Not that I object to her hookin up with her love. This would indeed make a great book. The story idea and characters are interesting. Makes me wonder what will happen in the future to/with his friends. Will they find True Loves also? Please keep writting!!!!!
Keep the plot changes coming. I love how you are dragging this out. Nothing is simple, and I love that Anna isn't capitulating to Cael. Wonderful. Love it!
Just because this site is about erotica doesn't mean every page needs to be filled with it. They way your developing this story is AWESOME. I get disappointed when I don't see a new chapter and can't wait for the next day to come so I can check again. Please don't let anyone rush your creativity or the story may suffer. You are doing a wonderful job. Be well.
Dayum!! This is awesome!! You have the makings of an outstanding novel, girl, I hope you know that. If I were you, I'd start looking for a publisher. Go for it!!
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Anonymous07/29/08
oh.my.god.
what a cruel place to leave it at... :( i await with avid interest the next addition... loves and regards lilmissfoxy
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Anonymous07/29/08
Arrggghhh!!!
My heart is racing after reading this installment. AMAZING writing!!!
Great writing please keep it coming. I just found your story today and I have spent hours sitting here reading it. You are a great writer I would tell you to get published but then I would never see the end of your story.
English
Not bad at all.
No prob that there wasn't any dirty dirty. I like the Mara character quite a bit. Hook her up with someone. Thank you for a great story.
great.. but jarring
While it was right along with the quality I've come to expect from you.. it almost bordered more on erotic horror. The rape scene made me cry, and when the child came to the door.. well the Mama in me almost made me stop reading. I may be the only one that feels this way but please warn us in the future if its going to be that intense. I just happened to check for this latest update to your storyline right before going to bed, and while you usually ilicit sexual excitement, I find myself dreading sleep, that I may find a nightmare of murdered children waiting for me. If I had known, I would have saved this chapter for daylight hours.
On edge!
I loved it as always and the sex though spicing things up is not essential. But... I wished those two would be with each other again i swear it's almost nerve wrecking to have them walk around in neverending circles!!!
Very Dark...
...and very good. This story has much depth, and definately needs to be told! Keep going pleeeeeeease!! lol
amazing
I have been reading this series and I am hooked and can't get enough of it. I do wish that the chapters were a bit longer but they are very well written and leave me on my toes wanting the next chapter to be posted. I check every day to see and I read the others over till the next one is done I am really looking forward to the next one keep up the good work.
Excellent Story
It's not all about sex. It's not really about the sex at all. You have written a truly gripping story here. The sex makes it better, but it's not what makes it great. I find myself marvelling at how you come up with the little details, like Alexander reading the reports about vampire murders. It's things like that that make your story incredibly rich and detailed. Keep up the good work.
I like these chapters even with no sex
This isn't an erotic piece, it's a piece of fiction that just gets better and better with every chapter. You are amazing Elianna, an amazing author.
panting for more
The plot is what's got me hooked and the writing style, not the sex parts (not that the sex is not yummy). Truly addictive. This is the first thing I check every morning. I'm itching for the part where the girls will be sighted by the manhunt. And I agree with the previous comment that Mara should have someone (perhaps Kieran *wink wink*). But of course I'm happy with anything you come up with. Keep it up! Kudos!
Incredible!! Keep the story going!!
You have such a gift for storytelling, please keep going. Each chapter--sex or not--leaves this reader salivating for more. I love the tension between Cael and Anna right now. Please let your diehard fans know when you'll be posting again.
excellent
I agree with everyone else, its not all about sex. i'd rather read an intense story than one diluted by nothing but sex,especially a great story such as this one. i'm hooked and can't wait for the next installment .. great job!
LOve it
You are such a good writer!! Absolutely glued to your stories. Not everything is always about sex. The plot, the flow.. Gosh... perfect
;~;
D: I neeeeeeed more!
Please hurry on the next chapter.
Can you make it 3 pages next time?
Please?
For your loyal fans!
Love it!
Love it! Please more! This story is getting good! Cant wait! Thanks!!
I Have Fallen
You are an incredible, gifted writer. It doesn't matter about the sex...life, it seems even a vampire's life, isn't always about sex. Your story is riveting. I don't want to turn the page, I want to devour the BOOK! And maybe see the movie someday....I don't mind how much time it takes, you write quality...anyone can turn out crap...but this is a real story and you seriously need to find an agent...quit your job and write.
fantastic work
hey elianna! another great chapter.leaves me panting for more.wish you had more time to write and that way we would get more out of you but oh well! can't really complain.
gah. I'm going to boycot literotica
...at least until this story is done...that way I don't end up checking obsessively.
You're evil. But at least you're using your talent for powers of good? or something.
Thank you!!!!
For yet another marvelous chapter. Everyone who has a well-paying publisher, send 'em Ellianna's way will ya? That quitting job and writing non-stop suggestion was a pretty good idea :)
ooohhhh thumbs up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!hmmm...hopefully it will be a beginning for new love story...kieran&mara???
please
i have been with ya since the begining and i'm here till the end..just one thing..please dont end this with them just seeing each other again..we need a last love scene between them that isnt just a dream... i wish it would go on forever but i understand you have other stories to write..and im a fan for them as well...but i've totally fallen in love with these guys. Thanks for creating such a wonderful tale...
Enjoying the fall into darkness,
these two women "on the road" and the solidarity they develop. Please write more soon !
Love It!!
Seriously I look forward to every chapter, I keep checking to see if it has been posted yet. Every chapter in the entire story has not let me down, and they all keep me at the edge of my seat!!
Awesome!!!
:)
Once again it's just too good.You should get published ;).
You really should stop apologising
for making us wait. Every wait is worth the while.
awesome
as always. I just wish he hadn't been so harsh with her. He should have told her he loved her right away before he looses the chance again! The scene with the family was hard to read, especially when the child walked in. But your writing is amazing. Please don't make us wait too long.
Amazing!
Yes it is true that there wasnt any sex scenes in this chapter...but who cares! lol. Yes of course we want the hot and sexy parts, but you need to have some chapters like this to makea great story. I think it was a key part for the chapter to be like this.
I really do hope that some how Alexander can help Mara out, so that Anna and him can finally be together! Please hurry with the next chapter. Dont take too long :) lol
Not lacking
At all in my few. The story is moving along at a fast clip and i am enthralled :) PJ xx
ay!
Can't wait for more! Your story has me on the edge of my seat! I love their relationship too! They are both so strong!
Another great chapter!!!
You will never know how happy it makes me to see that there is a new chapter posted. Great writing as always. You know how to keep the suspense going amazingly well. Good luck on 16.
bite your tongue
Thank you for listening to your fans and not abandoning your story! Guess what?! Your chapters are hot even without the sex scenes! Judy goes to show you that your talent supercedes even our expectations of what is usually posted on this sight! You have breathed life into the characters and have enchanted me with the depths of the characters! Whatever you do, don't stop because you do it well!!!
Omg i luv you!
I love this series so muc i want them together so bad!
on the end of my seat !!
wow i luv this storie am so glad yhoo desided to carry on cant wait for the next chapter xxxx!!
GREAT chapter!
Good for Anna. I'm glad she's not a pushover, even when she's confused. And I'm surprised that Cael isn't willing to bend the rules for her. She's only going to resist if he's possessive or if he tries to take without giving anything. Well, I can't wait to see where you take the story next!
awesome awesome awesome
15 chapters in and I still can't wait for the net.
You've got TALENT!!!
I liked this chapter, not a lot of sexuality but the characters are evolving and you feel apart of their angry and confusion.
You have an awesome talent and are definitely going to be one of my favourites.
CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!!
Ooookay!!
Chapter 15 finally made it up. No sex, so what? and frankly I don't care. I loved it and the story just keeps getting better and better. I actually wanted to grab Paolo and stake him in the sun somewhere in the Sahara Desert. Could you make the next chapter a little longer? Pretty pleeeaase... Hmmm, Mara and Kieran? Now that would be fireworks worth seeing. Anyway, keep up the good work and I'm seriously hoping the next chapter gets put up sooner than later.
This is SO GOOD, I'm tingling all over !!
No sex, WHO CARES??! You've got tslent,snd the plot is so good,right now sex isn't needed.I cannot wait for the next few chapters, she should rock!
Loved It!!! Can't wait for more
just coming into this after a members search early this morning...read straight through chapters 1 thru 15...can't wait for the next installment.
LOVED IT
I'm truly grateful that you've continued the series even with a busy lifestyle. Thank you so much!
Excellent
I read chapter 1 through to 15 this morning, fantastic!! I can't wait for the next chapter! Oh, and by the way - I would buy the book!!! or books as the case may be - I can see you developing the characters and plot into a series of books. Right up there with Christine Feehan.
OMFG great story I want more.
I just started reading this story and all I want is more your such a great author I love it. ^_^ Please hurry up I want it to end yet I don't .
please....more
I'm kinda praying that you'll decide on a weekend to just do nothing but write. I'm sure a lot of us would spend a weekend just reading it. Keep em coming.
-J
KEEP WRITING!!!!!!!!!
Lady this story is so good it does not need gratuituos sex to get me to read it. Not that I object to her hookin up with her love. This would indeed make a great book. The story idea and characters are interesting. Makes me wonder what will happen in the future to/with his friends. Will they find True Loves also? Please keep writting!!!!!
Sigh, wonderful
Keep the plot changes coming. I love how you are dragging this out. Nothing is simple, and I love that Anna isn't capitulating to Cael. Wonderful. Love it!
Worth The Wait
Just because this site is about erotica doesn't mean every page needs to be filled with it. They way your developing this story is AWESOME. I get disappointed when I don't see a new chapter and can't wait for the next day to come so I can check again. Please don't let anyone rush your creativity or the story may suffer. You are doing a wonderful job. Be well.
lovin it
Lovin this story, the plot is so well thought out. Keep up the wonderful work!
Best story
Best Literotica story I've ever read, and I've read a lot of them. Keep updating and i look foward to the next chapter.
Oh, man...
Dayum!! This is awesome!! You have the makings of an outstanding novel, girl, I hope you know that. If I were you, I'd start looking for a publisher. Go for it!!
oh.my.god.
what a cruel place to leave it at... :( i await with avid interest the next addition... loves and regards lilmissfoxy
Arrggghhh!!!
My heart is racing after reading this installment. AMAZING writing!!!
Great
Great writing please keep it coming. I just found your story today and I have spent hours sitting here reading it. You are a great writer I would tell you to get published but then I would never see the end of your story.
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