Sorry but this has story and this wife has only one way to go and that is down hill. The wife is being selfish and ignoreing the husband. If a couple are to stay together they have to work things out. The wife doesn't care what the husband thinks she only wants to satisfy her desires his doesn't come in to it. I can only hope against hope you don't go down the path of her becoming some sort of sex crazed nymphomaniac. But It's your story and your fantasy this is not even close to being one of mine! Anyway I hope you enjoy writing the next chapter.
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Anonymous07/25/08
Hopefully
She is honest with husband when she starts to fuck around and he can make his choice, stay or go. Not much chance for this marriage.
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Anonymous07/25/08
Way to short.
Chapters are way to short to start reading.
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Anonymous07/25/08
why
should anyone leaving a comment? everybody knows where you wanna go. so another stupid couple with a woman who can't talk. maybe the whole day about weather or other crap but not about something that matters. you can stop the story if the character don't improve a lot. if I wanna read shit I buy an american newspaper.
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Anonymous07/26/08
This wife
This wife is a selfish and self centered whore, the husband need to wise up and leave the dirty cunt in the dust. Typical of the wimpy crap coming out of the UK lately.
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Anonymous07/28/08
Take a brain dead woman who is easily led astray.
a dumb husband who loves his wife. A woman to be used by others without cause or effect. Diseases that hinder, rot, and kill. ANd you have this story in a nutshell. If all couples and people were like this you would know why marriage died out hundreds of years ago.
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Anonymous07/28/08
Good start
I am enjoying the build up in your story. It's going to be really good when she finally give up to her desires.
Never mind gw66 although he is very familiar with stories going down hill as ALL of his do. He sucks as a writer hense he rags on the ones better than he, which is all of you.
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Anonymous03/03/09
not a lot of sympathy
wife was crass and flaunted and taunted what she did. me, its difficult to say some justice was not served
A story about a woman who never should have married
The woman that dominates the story obviously never should have committed herself to any man, for she is unable to keep her legs together. Regardless of the long winded rationale for her, she is a slut and probably will be until her cunt dries up.
What sex negative readers always surprises me, especially for this site. She didn't cheat, she entertained erotic thoughts (don't we all) and had wild sex with her husband. Will she cheat in the future, only the author knows.
Tba has written very erotic scenes here. The writings good!
English
Just as I thought!
Sorry but this has story and this wife has only one way to go and that is down hill. The wife is being selfish and ignoreing the husband. If a couple are to stay together they have to work things out. The wife doesn't care what the husband thinks she only wants to satisfy her desires his doesn't come in to it. I can only hope against hope you don't go down the path of her becoming some sort of sex crazed nymphomaniac. But It's your story and your fantasy this is not even close to being one of mine! Anyway I hope you enjoy writing the next chapter.
Hopefully
She is honest with husband when she starts to fuck around and he can make his choice, stay or go. Not much chance for this marriage.
Way to short.
Chapters are way to short to start reading.
why
should anyone leaving a comment? everybody knows where you wanna go. so another stupid couple with a woman who can't talk. maybe the whole day about weather or other crap but not about something that matters. you can stop the story if the character don't improve a lot. if I wanna read shit I buy an american newspaper.
This wife
This wife is a selfish and self centered whore, the husband need to wise up and leave the dirty cunt in the dust. Typical of the wimpy crap coming out of the UK lately.
Take a brain dead woman who is easily led astray.
a dumb husband who loves his wife. A woman to be used by others without cause or effect. Diseases that hinder, rot, and kill. ANd you have this story in a nutshell. If all couples and people were like this you would know why marriage died out hundreds of years ago.
Good start
I am enjoying the build up in your story. It's going to be really good when she finally give up to her desires.
Never mind gw66 although he is very familiar with stories going down hill as ALL of his do. He sucks as a writer hense he rags on the ones better than he, which is all of you.
not a lot of sympathy
wife was crass and flaunted and taunted what she did. me, its difficult to say some justice was not served
Crap
No chapter 3. Yay.
A story about a woman who never should have married
The woman that dominates the story obviously never should have committed herself to any man, for she is unable to keep her legs together. Regardless of the long winded rationale for her, she is a slut and probably will be until her cunt dries up.
I thought it was good!
What sex negative readers always surprises me, especially for this site. She didn't cheat, she entertained erotic thoughts (don't we all) and had wild sex with her husband. Will she cheat in the future, only the author knows.
Tba has written very erotic scenes here. The writings good!
Go figure,
Chilley
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