What a wonderful beginning to a story! Brilliant writing! I already feel like I know the characters from the way you write. I can't wait for the next chapters following. The only thing I can suggest if I may? Longer chapters. When a story is as good as this one, the reader doesn't want it to end after only one page. It leaves us frustrated, hahaha. But seriously...other than that, I think so far it's PERFECT!
by
Anonymous07/25/08
Good start.......
....do keep it coming
by
Anonymous01/28/09
More?
You've set us up for an interesting story- where is it?
by
Anonymous12/03/09
more
don't hanging. please finish the rest of the story.
by
Anonymous03/04/10
A good start!
A good promising start..... Sorry to see there is no update! I love the feel of this romance!
English
WOW!
What a wonderful beginning to a story! Brilliant writing! I already feel like I know the characters from the way you write. I can't wait for the next chapters following. The only thing I can suggest if I may? Longer chapters. When a story is as good as this one, the reader doesn't want it to end after only one page. It leaves us frustrated, hahaha. But seriously...other than that, I think so far it's PERFECT!
Good start.......
....do keep it coming
More?
You've set us up for an interesting story- where is it?
more
don't hanging. please finish the rest of the story.
A good start!
A good promising start..... Sorry to see there is no update! I love the feel of this romance!
From the Writer
Thank you for so many lovely comments - I promise that an update will be on it's way!
Next installment
PLEASE write the next installment!! It's been a damned year!
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