All Comments on 'Down But Still Up For Fun Ch. 03'

by BobBaker

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
look a lot of us commentors aren't writers

so we read and your story is a great read.please keep writing and don't bye any means let someone tell you different.give us more soon and thanks for your time in writing your story.

Tired TexanTired Texanover 15 years ago
Lovin' it

Please keep this story going! Love the characters and the story line. Give us more.

MsDaienKnightMsDaienKnightover 15 years ago
better and better

The story just gets better and better honey!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
It's a...

bit jarring to have him talking about her feelings in that last paragraph. Good work otherwise so far - thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Broken legs

If you have two broken legs in casts you would not be climbng all over a woman

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