by BobBaker
so we read and your story is a great read.please keep writing and don't bye any means let someone tell you different.give us more soon and thanks for your time in writing your story.
Please keep this story going! Love the characters and the story line. Give us more.
bit jarring to have him talking about her feelings in that last paragraph. Good work otherwise so far - thanks.
If you have two broken legs in casts you would not be climbng all over a woman