All Comments on 'Love in the Leagues Ch. 02'

Great story. I like how through it all they still love each other!! And Keith is such an asshole!!

I love this story!!!! I hope Keith gets his balls handed to him!!!!

I really hoping there's more

love it. hope you decide to finish it one day!

OMG please finish this story. I can't walk away u have drawn me in I need to know the ending. Please Finish!

ei finish this story please. i want my happy ending. i want the revenge zach planned for keith, the oaf. please write the ending... this is 2 years overdue. :)

Hurry and update... i cant wait to see how this plays out!

I think you could have done better with this plot. I think I now understand why you haven't updated. Really? You took her from her love to give her to some scum bag. That you let defile her by raping her. WOW ok.

Come on finish this... it was getting so good but please edit, it is your friend

I truly hope you'll finish this. I can't wait because I hope that damn Kieth get whats coming to him. He is such an ass. He thinks that because he is a hot shot ball player he can get whom ever he wants but that dog don't hunt. He belittled Zach talking about he won't make the pros but Zach is smart and Keith does not have brains enough to know that and injury could put him out of commission with his cocky ass.