All Comments on 'Torrid in Toledo Ch. 01'

Great story! Well written and very erotic.

Nicely done... and enough characters left for special times.

really hottt beginning..but definetly get vic's hubby/jim's dad into the action for some total bi family fun...getting her son and hubby into some hot male dad/son bi...with her directing and participating and becoming their cum slut...and perhaps their neighbor can be included with her entire family for total bi action...which women like myself and real bi couples turn-on to...and which seems to be constantly ommitted in most stories on this site..

Great to see you are submitting stories again! For those who don't know this author's stories are from way back, probably 10 years old now. Its been that long since a new story has come out too. So this is very cool.

Poontang? I haven't heard that word in fifty years. Good story!

Nice writing style, very hot, more!

Loved it! Glad there are more chapters to read and more family members to fuck!

This all seems a bit too easy for Jim. doing a first-time fuck of his mom, while fucking and ass-reaming their next-door neighbour. and all this after his young sis seduces her Grampy on her first try.