All Comments on 'A Little Persuasion Ch. 02'

The storyline switch from character to character got a little confusing at one point, but not overly so. It just took me a minute to adjust and get things straight in my head, I guess. But, I deeply enjoyed reading this story. It was very touching and real. Thanks for writing it.

.....the story was excellent!! Great job!! Keep them coming!!

Very sweet! Loved the way you painted a picture of their little cozy world. The characters are very real too.

It's sooo good! *sigh*

i loveddd it omygod it was amzing i liked how u summed it up for us in the second chapter i read the first one and i was a bti confused i liek how u took the time to have their stories all out there to show how they met n stuff it was lovely kuddos to u

Sweet story, Hot scenes!

i had tears in my eyes after reading this..wonderful job, and please give us more-yes we are greedy for your wonderful stories. the way you present them(George and Josh)it's like you have this awesome mental pic of them. A+

This was a great read...they are cute together. Thanks

This story is beautifully written. It captures the lust, sensuality and most importantly, genuine intimacy between the characters. The writer captured the kind of connection that I and many women dream about and making myself the spokesperson for those who share the dream and love the story............WE WANT MORE!!!!

I'm going to second Madame Spokeswoman below. This story is excellent!! A deft blend of catching but not in your face plot, beautiful character development, and at this point, so well written that you could either leave it here or continue seamlessly. Well done!!

What joy, what fun it is to fall in love. You write beautifully; keep it up.

You HAVE to write MORE stories. I absuoltey loved this one.

You have a talent for writing which is more than can be said for 99% of the other "writers" here. Only please - stop with the "warmth in her cheeks" BS. Black skin DOES NOT flush like white skin. Writing stuff like that is ridiculous and lowers the writing to the level of mills and boon crap.

Excellent story! And don't listen to the previous comment...we DO show warmth in the cheeks! It may not be as "red" as fair skin women but it is there to see and feel all the same :-)

Very romantic, and much more. Both chapters well done.

i am classed as black,does not matter how light skinned i am,i am still classed as black.and i do BLUSH i little bit.any way.love your story

One of the best stories I have ever read. Thank you!

This is my first review and I'm glad I read this. It was touching, hot, sexy and I wish it didn't end. Thank you :-)

This was so well written, so much love and affection from two that were so different, yet the same as looking to be loved for who they really were, we all look for that One for us to Love us as No Other Can, but GOD...

this is amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ever thought of writing ur own romance novels, ud make a fortune. keep it up!

I really enjoyed this story!

I absolutely loved this story. Josh, his deep voice, and nerdiness all formed in my head easily. And, man, was he hot. George, I loved her, which I guess is do to the fact that she sounds a lot like me, except for having an afro and being an artist. They were one of the best couples I've read about on this site. Very good story. Please write again!

I think Josh is my dream guy. Too bad he's taken...and a work of fiction.

EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!!

I love this story!!! I need a "Josh" in my life!! Shy White men are sexy as hell!!

please write my stories. you're such an amazing writer! :)

I will keep commented on your writing style until you

post something new for us to read!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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I haven't been on this site in several months. But the day I did come back, I find this little gem. I am so glad I did! This story was wonderfully written and you did not rush the character development or make it too much when you described the sex scenes. Your writing is inspiring you put so much passion in your characters they seemed like real people. I gave you 5 stars, but you deserve 10!!! I hope you add more chapters to this story, it is worth continuing.

You have a fan in me. Keep writing and I will keep reading!

KittyOh 48

Beautiful

A true love story! NEW FAV STORY!

i want a man like josh

Cute and sweet! :)

Great characters, loved the back-and-forth pov, very rarely do I enjoy that btw, you nailed it.

Jason

Loved this story and sweet characters. Read it again. Please post more stories. I especially like romantic black female nonblack male stories that arent kink drivened.

You have a nice feel for the language and for the emotions of people. I hope you write books.

It was nice to see a story with my name in it lolzzz. Well almost. My name is spelled Georgianna. Great story.

I’m pretty sure this is the sweetest story post on LIT and with the cutest of characters. Long live these types of stories. Giving hope and O’s

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Mucho Kawaii!

11/10!!!!!