i stopped after a few paragraphs way too many stupid goofs. she is 19 and he called her his mother did you even proof read this. think before posting and always use a good editor before posting. DBRS
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YOU NEED A GOOD EDITOR
i stopped after a few paragraphs way too many stupid goofs. she is 19 and he called her his mother did you even proof read this. think before posting and always use a good editor before posting.
DBRS
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