All Comments on 'So Young!'

by twoworlds

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
So Young needs to learn

let her teach him how to please a woman........very good I loved it because it was like a quickie....and after the quickies comes the sensual sex.......don't stop

Mystery_MeatMystery_Meatover 15 years ago
Disappointing

The work situation that connected the characters couldn't have been more vague. Except for their ages, there were no physical descriptions of the characters. Try using one of the volunteer editors in the future.

Scotsman69Scotsman69over 15 years ago
Poor mysterymeat

One of the very fine things about your story is PRECISELY the vagueness of the relationship. Go for more, twoworlds, you are good.

JorisKHuysmansJorisKHuysmansover 15 years ago
Nice impressionistic job

I liked the way the story sketched it without describing it to a T. We got what mattered, including what was in her head. Very sexy story, refreshing. I have a vaguely similar tale called "Mrs. Lambfinger of the 9th Grade," you might be interested to check it out.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
That was perfect!

Hot and heavy...masterful. More, please!

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