would have written what is below. I enjoyed it. If I don't like a story I ignore it, and don't finish reading it or marking it. Why read a story if you don't like it?
To the anonymous writer of the comment starting 'crap' and 'wimp'. Please comment on the story and not on how it's subject matter measures up to your own personal morality and preferences.
What you are doing is rather like giving Shakespeare 0/10 for 'A Midsummer Night's Dream.' just because you don't believe in fairies.
No, I wouldn't just stand and watch another man fuck my wife either, but that doesn't mean it isn't a well written story - it is. For God's sake be fair to the author and mark him on his work and not on his preferences.
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Anonymous07/25/08
Not My Thing!
Do you trust your wife now, will her friend be back, will you need to cockold your self to get a erection from now on. Your marriage took a huge turn and youe smileing, not badley written just not my thing.
The commentators from the UK seem to be upset because someone expressed an opinion. Well I'm ashamed to say I live in the UK as well BUT I DO NOT have any fantasy that would involve my wife having sex with anybody else. I know that sound strange seeing as this is a sex site and this is 'LOVING WIVES' but that's how it is. I normally enjoy drama type loving wife stories where for instance the husband realises that he has lost his wife to some one else and leaves her. Or a strong willed husband stops his wife from haveing sex with some one else. For instance in this story if I was writing a second chapter, the husband would come to his senses and after cleaning him self up he would pack his bags and leave the wife, but of course the wife would cry about how it was only sex, he meant nothing to her, that sort of thing, she still loved him. But I would let the husband let the wife go and then she can have sex with whoever she wants. The writer doesn't say it but the wife committed the act of sex with somebody else far to easily which to me makes me think she has done it before. and the husband really does want to be a cuckold. Apparently many people from the UK also want to be cuckolds judgeing by the comments of UK men. And strangly woman seem to like the idea of cuckolding men as well. Well that's equality for you!
Apart from that well written story, the writer set out exactly what he wanted to say and what his fantsy is, so in that respect it worked.
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Anonymous07/25/08
may I guess
your now so old you don't care for your woman anymore not even with viagra , right ? otherwise you are stupid and have a whore at home.
Why can't you just comment on the story and not on the moral standards of the people involved? For me the story seemed real as I have lived through a very similar incident and know what too much drinking and a lot of flirting can do to both men and women. All inhibitions are down and often simple fantasy can come alive in a split second. Once started, it is hard to stop.
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Anonymous07/26/08
Comments On English Watching Self Cuck
Stories are graded on at least 2 factors - the majors being ability shown and subject matter.
There is no getting around that both are the most affecting upon readers.
This was a story of a once proud used to be a man but now just a wimp excited by the disrespect of his ho and watching her new{?} cock take her where he never will. The writer obviously is into male humiliation as many English are seemingly of late want to be.
Mindless self cucks are a weak spineless excuse for a man who no one respects - least of all himself.
How sad writer especially for those around you.
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Anonymous07/26/08
Obviously
Another Wimp husband and Whore wife story, makes you wanna just shit..........to the Aussie teacher, shut the hell up and go fuck your sheep, close enough to a limey queer.....
Please excuse the jack ass below whose comment is titled "Obviously.". You wrote nothing that warranted such a crude response. Apparently the concept of recognizing and conceding the right of someone, with conviction equal to his, holding an opinion contrary to his own was too challenging for his meager intellect to comprehend.However, as he and many others have volunteered, I too have great difficulty understanding the thrill garnered by a married man by watching another male bed his wife. For me it's akin to my buying a new car and getting a big charge out of watching others drive it. What's the point?As to the submission at hand, I regard it not as a story but more as an episode. It felt as if I had arrived late to a movie and, having missed the beginning, had no clue as to why the characters behaved as they did. I acknowledge the inference early in the story that the husband is a bit of a voyeur, but nowhere is it indicated that he yearns to watch his wife be intimate with another man. His immediate reaction of immense arousal in witnessing his wife's adultery suggests a sudden revelation wherein he realized that his voyeurism extended to cuckoldry. The narrative describes him with eyes that linger at greater length on the man than they do on his wife. Does that suggest anything? What I really find difficult to rationalize is the behavior of a husband who, while anxiously awaiting the anticipated experience of his wife's affections, finds so erotic her choosing to share them with someone else instead. And his response of tears streaming down his face?! That was carrying this act too far. That jump-started my gag reflex. As far as the wife's behavior is concerned, the writer portrays her as being predisposed to soon enter into an extramarital tryst. The alcohol didn't cause it. It only facilitated it. If the infidelity hadn't happened now, it was only a matter of time.Hey, to each his own. I'm sure that a number of people found this effort titillating. I thought it was pedestrian and unremarkable. But let's hope for Don's sake that she at least got pregnant.
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Anonymous07/26/08
Sorry I have never been frozen and cant visualize
a man being frozen while his wife commits adultry while he is that in the home. I like a bit of realism in my stories and a wife drinking and fucking another man without my prior permission isnt something that turns me on. Why permission you say, well a husband and a wife have a legal contract, called marriage, and when one commits adultry one breaks that contract and the marriage is already null, void comes with the divorce.
Thanks to all those who took the time to post a comment. I really appreciate the feedback, even that which was unsupportive.
I was surprised no-one tried to pick the spot where reality slipped into fantasy, yet some judged me personally as if the whole thing were true. Maybe it was, maybe it wasn’t. Maybe I have a very fertile imagination or maybe a strong memory. Does it matter?
What’s more, some displayed a ‘holier than thou’ attitude and I’m puzzled what people like that are doing wandering around a site like Literotica. To each his own I suppose.
I will make one other point. Some commentators took the opportunity to have a go at people of other nationalities. This is the stuff of petty parochialism and future comments bearing this type of sentiment will be edited out. As the author, I am prepared to wear whatever criticism comes my way – I put my story out there publicly and I’ll accept criticism along with accolades. But I’m not happy that my stories might fuel petty and unnecessary attacks on others.
Remember – such remarks say more about the speaker than they do about their target.
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Anonymous07/27/08
Good story
Good story the visceral reactions are a testament to the level or realism your brought.
The setup and delivery of the story was sexy. The prose lined up nicely even though the subject made my stomach drop. I swear I felt and saw my wife as the woman in this story, so the realism was there for me. I suppose I should thank you for letting me know fairly definitively that I don't want to share. I always wondered if I could take being in an open relationship, or couple swapping etc.
my guess for the fantasy reality divide was the point where you fell asleep for 25 minutes and they where still only kissing.
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Anonymous07/30/08
Hey folks
If this were a writing class we could talk about the fine points of writing and use a grammar. It isnt and a few misspelled words and such will come from folks that arent professional writers. What we can comment on freely tho is the plot, the characters, and the various images espoused by the writer in the story. If we like the story we can say so, if we dont we can say so. If the morals, ethics, or abuse in the story turns us on or off we can say so. This is literotica, where people can read what they think are sexually arousing erotic stories. If I dont care for the morals ethics, morals, or character of a story or the persons in the story doesnt mean I dont like erotica stories, it means I dont like the writers choice in those areas. And as a reader it is my choice to either like or dislike the writers presentation for me to read. Every reader in Lit has a valid opinion whether the hide behind a fake nickname or not. Put another way, a writer is only as good as the readers say he/she is. And the story may turn one person on and turn another off. One man's meat is another man's poison.
The story was nicely written, although the storyline wasn't quite where I expected it to be for the 'loving wives' section.
All these comments I see with people pretending this is 100% real is depressing. This is LITEROTICA, and almost all stories are just that - a story. Fiction. Made up. Pretend. Please take the story for what it is, a mind fuck, not a observation of what really happened.
For what it's worth, I'm guessing that the break between reality and fantasy started with the "I woke up 25 minutes later" part.
Nicely written though. Is there a thought for a 'part 2' to follow up on this? Maybe the wife arranging for her husband to enjoy one of her friends while she watches?
I really enjoyed your story, so much that I took the time to register as a member in order to send you a comment. Your story happens to be my "first" favorite saved, and I look forward to your next.
I'm really surprised at all the hate being sent. Please know that there is a following for your story line here, and you've a fan in me!
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Anonymous10/18/11
Hey,
it's nice to know some sluts like to keep a tally of the times they've revealed their true natures as little more than semen-depositories. I don't know you, but I know your type. Enjoy your life, and livelihood, while it lasts, because it won't last much longer, especially seeing how sloppy you are about covering your tracks. I wish I could watch as you get thrown out on your ass. Note, I only said SLUTS' true natures as semen depositories. There are actually women worth something in this world, and thankfully, we outnumber your kind. Evolution selects for honest, intelligent, FAITHFUL individuals, when referring to Homo Sapiens that is, so I look forward to watching the extinction of your kind, male and female. I will indeed revel in it.
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Anonymous05/31/12
Goddam...
it seems the majority of authors have secret ambitions to be wimps.
Sloppy seconds seem to delight them. Sorry...don´t like this story
English
wimp...wimP...wiMP...wIMP...WIMP
crap...craP...crAP...cRAP...CRAP...Were he any kind of man at all, he would have kicked both of their asses out the door.
Only an anonymous writer
would have written what is below. I enjoyed it. If I don't like a story I ignore it, and don't finish reading it or marking it. Why read a story if you don't like it?
Please comment on the story.
To the anonymous writer of the comment starting 'crap' and 'wimp'. Please comment on the story and not on how it's subject matter measures up to your own personal morality and preferences.
What you are doing is rather like giving Shakespeare 0/10 for 'A Midsummer Night's Dream.' just because you don't believe in fairies.
No, I wouldn't just stand and watch another man fuck my wife either, but that doesn't mean it isn't a well written story - it is. For God's sake be fair to the author and mark him on his work and not on his preferences.
Not My Thing!
Do you trust your wife now, will her friend be back, will you need to cockold your self to get a erection from now on. Your marriage took a huge turn and youe smileing, not badley written just not my thing.
Okay!
The commentators from the UK seem to be upset because someone expressed an opinion. Well I'm ashamed to say I live in the UK as well BUT I DO NOT have any fantasy that would involve my wife having sex with anybody else. I know that sound strange seeing as this is a sex site and this is 'LOVING WIVES' but that's how it is. I normally enjoy drama type loving wife stories where for instance the husband realises that he has lost his wife to some one else and leaves her. Or a strong willed husband stops his wife from haveing sex with some one else. For instance in this story if I was writing a second chapter, the husband would come to his senses and after cleaning him self up he would pack his bags and leave the wife, but of course the wife would cry about how it was only sex, he meant nothing to her, that sort of thing, she still loved him. But I would let the husband let the wife go and then she can have sex with whoever she wants. The writer doesn't say it but the wife committed the act of sex with somebody else far to easily which to me makes me think she has done it before. and the husband really does want to be a cuckold. Apparently many people from the UK also want to be cuckolds judgeing by the comments of UK men. And strangly woman seem to like the idea of cuckolding men as well. Well that's equality for you!
Apart from that well written story, the writer set out exactly what he wanted to say and what his fantsy is, so in that respect it worked.
may I guess
your now so old you don't care for your woman anymore not even with viagra , right ? otherwise you are stupid and have a whore at home.
To the haters
Why can't you just comment on the story and not on the moral standards of the people involved? For me the story seemed real as I have lived through a very similar incident and know what too much drinking and a lot of flirting can do to both men and women. All inhibitions are down and often simple fantasy can come alive in a split second. Once started, it is hard to stop.
Comments On English Watching Self Cuck
Stories are graded on at least 2 factors - the majors being ability shown and subject matter.
There is no getting around that both are the most affecting upon readers.
This was a story of a once proud used to be a man but now just a wimp excited by the disrespect of his ho and watching her new{?} cock take her where he never will. The writer obviously is into male humiliation as many English are seemingly of late want to be.
Mindless self cucks are a weak spineless excuse for a man who no one respects - least of all himself.
How sad writer especially for those around you.
Obviously
Another Wimp husband and Whore wife story, makes you wanna just shit..........to the Aussie teacher, shut the hell up and go fuck your sheep, close enough to a limey queer.....
Not Selfish....
Very erotic. Did she get preggie? Was she trying for your friend's baby?
To "Aussie_Teacher"
Please excuse the jack ass below whose comment is titled "Obviously.". You wrote nothing that warranted such a crude response. Apparently the concept of recognizing and conceding the right of someone, with conviction equal to his, holding an opinion contrary to his own was too challenging for his meager intellect to comprehend.However, as he and many others have volunteered, I too have great difficulty understanding the thrill garnered by a married man by watching another male bed his wife. For me it's akin to my buying a new car and getting a big charge out of watching others drive it. What's the point?As to the submission at hand, I regard it not as a story but more as an episode. It felt as if I had arrived late to a movie and, having missed the beginning, had no clue as to why the characters behaved as they did. I acknowledge the inference early in the story that the husband is a bit of a voyeur, but nowhere is it indicated that he yearns to watch his wife be intimate with another man. His immediate reaction of immense arousal in witnessing his wife's adultery suggests a sudden revelation wherein he realized that his voyeurism extended to cuckoldry. The narrative describes him with eyes that linger at greater length on the man than they do on his wife. Does that suggest anything? What I really find difficult to rationalize is the behavior of a husband who, while anxiously awaiting the anticipated experience of his wife's affections, finds so erotic her choosing to share them with someone else instead. And his response of tears streaming down his face?! That was carrying this act too far. That jump-started my gag reflex. As far as the wife's behavior is concerned, the writer portrays her as being predisposed to soon enter into an extramarital tryst. The alcohol didn't cause it. It only facilitated it. If the infidelity hadn't happened now, it was only a matter of time.Hey, to each his own. I'm sure that a number of people found this effort titillating. I thought it was pedestrian and unremarkable. But let's hope for Don's sake that she at least got pregnant.
Sorry I have never been frozen and cant visualize
a man being frozen while his wife commits adultry while he is that in the home. I like a bit of realism in my stories and a wife drinking and fucking another man without my prior permission isnt something that turns me on. Why permission you say, well a husband and a wife have a legal contract, called marriage, and when one commits adultry one breaks that contract and the marriage is already null, void comes with the divorce.
Comment on the comments
Thanks to all those who took the time to post a comment. I really appreciate the feedback, even that which was unsupportive.
I was surprised no-one tried to pick the spot where reality slipped into fantasy, yet some judged me personally as if the whole thing were true. Maybe it was, maybe it wasn’t. Maybe I have a very fertile imagination or maybe a strong memory. Does it matter?
What’s more, some displayed a ‘holier than thou’ attitude and I’m puzzled what people like that are doing wandering around a site like Literotica. To each his own I suppose.
I will make one other point. Some commentators took the opportunity to have a go at people of other nationalities. This is the stuff of petty parochialism and future comments bearing this type of sentiment will be edited out. As the author, I am prepared to wear whatever criticism comes my way – I put my story out there publicly and I’ll accept criticism along with accolades. But I’m not happy that my stories might fuel petty and unnecessary attacks on others.
Remember – such remarks say more about the speaker than they do about their target.
Good story
Good story the visceral reactions are a testament to the level or realism your brought.
The setup and delivery of the story was sexy. The prose lined up nicely even though the subject made my stomach drop. I swear I felt and saw my wife as the woman in this story, so the realism was there for me. I suppose I should thank you for letting me know fairly definitively that I don't want to share. I always wondered if I could take being in an open relationship, or couple swapping etc.
my guess for the fantasy reality divide was the point where you fell asleep for 25 minutes and they where still only kissing.
Hey folks
If this were a writing class we could talk about the fine points of writing and use a grammar. It isnt and a few misspelled words and such will come from folks that arent professional writers. What we can comment on freely tho is the plot, the characters, and the various images espoused by the writer in the story. If we like the story we can say so, if we dont we can say so. If the morals, ethics, or abuse in the story turns us on or off we can say so. This is literotica, where people can read what they think are sexually arousing erotic stories. If I dont care for the morals ethics, morals, or character of a story or the persons in the story doesnt mean I dont like erotica stories, it means I dont like the writers choice in those areas. And as a reader it is my choice to either like or dislike the writers presentation for me to read. Every reader in Lit has a valid opinion whether the hide behind a fake nickname or not. Put another way, a writer is only as good as the readers say he/she is. And the story may turn one person on and turn another off. One man's meat is another man's poison.
Sick people do sick things.
Having a wife that is a cum dump is sick.
Good've been better
But my dick still got nice and hard, keep writing and thanks for the story.
Cum dump heaven
Otherwise known as an AIDS palace.
It's a STORY, and a fairly decent one at that.
The story was nicely written, although the storyline wasn't quite where I expected it to be for the 'loving wives' section.
All these comments I see with people pretending this is 100% real is depressing. This is LITEROTICA, and almost all stories are just that - a story. Fiction. Made up. Pretend. Please take the story for what it is, a mind fuck, not a observation of what really happened.
For what it's worth, I'm guessing that the break between reality and fantasy started with the "I woke up 25 minutes later" part.
Nicely written though. Is there a thought for a 'part 2' to follow up on this? Maybe the wife arranging for her husband to enjoy one of her friends while she watches?
Enjoyed the story
I really enjoyed your story, so much that I took the time to register as a member in order to send you a comment. Your story happens to be my "first" favorite saved, and I look forward to your next.
I'm really surprised at all the hate being sent. Please know that there is a following for your story line here, and you've a fan in me!
Hey,
it's nice to know some sluts like to keep a tally of the times they've revealed their true natures as little more than semen-depositories. I don't know you, but I know your type. Enjoy your life, and livelihood, while it lasts, because it won't last much longer, especially seeing how sloppy you are about covering your tracks. I wish I could watch as you get thrown out on your ass. Note, I only said SLUTS' true natures as semen depositories. There are actually women worth something in this world, and thankfully, we outnumber your kind. Evolution selects for honest, intelligent, FAITHFUL individuals, when referring to Homo Sapiens that is, so I look forward to watching the extinction of your kind, male and female. I will indeed revel in it.
Goddam...
it seems the majority of authors have secret ambitions to be wimps.
Sloppy seconds seem to delight them. Sorry...don´t like this story
Great story
I loved it!!!!!
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