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Dockside Ch. 02

byAdrian Leverkuhn©
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by Anonymous07/26/08

Great

Not sure why you had two chapters since this would have fit nicely with the first one.

Boyd

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by Koreavet07/26/08

I'll stick for a while

I always thought Ruark was a pussy, and that
Wright didn't take advice from his engineers, but I'll be back for more of this. I do know a sailor, around the world with wife and 2 kids in a 50 footer.

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by Anonymous07/26/08

Impressive!

I liked the first chapter, but this chapter is awesome writing. There is some beautiful imagery in this item! If you keep this up, you'll have to give up your day job. ;-)
-- KK in Texas

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by Anonymous07/26/08

A Story With Depth and Meaning

Thank you for sharing your talent with us, and, please, keep tantalizing and challenging us with it!!!

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