$100,000 mansion? Hell that wouldn't even buy a small house with today's prices.
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Anonymous07/28/08
Hopeless!
Proofreading is just the start of it.
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Anonymous08/02/08
This has potential
Okay, so there were a couple of errors. Those can be fixed by simply having someone else edit. The basic idea is good, and I can see several more stories coming out of this. Treat this as a rough draft and go on from here to make the story better.
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proofread please.
$100,000 mansion? Hell that wouldn't even buy a small house with today's prices.
Hopeless!
Proofreading is just the start of it.
This has potential
Okay, so there were a couple of errors. Those can be fixed by simply having someone else edit. The basic idea is good, and I can see several more stories coming out of this. Treat this as a rough draft and go on from here to make the story better.
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