by UnderYourSpell
This is a really fine response to the Erotic Villanelle challenge. It's full of tender denouement and answers the requirements of the form quite well. Good work on a difficult test! - CC
The majority of the poem reads very smoothly. Watch out for clichs, which is hard to avoid sometimes when you're working with such a strict form. You really have to rack your brain to come up with fresh phrases when you're restricted by the rhyme scheme. Still, it's a good effort and you get an A for effort!