All Comments on 'Betsy's Bikini'

by Irish Moss

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oldtwitoldtwitabout 12 years ago
Nice

I remember days like this , real people real events real sex... good read hope you follow up on this couple

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago
excellent story but...

This story should have been the introductory chapter to a longer story, as it has great potential in terms of both character development and plot. The love scene here is very well-written, although it as well is rather too short.

PapaGolf414PapaGolf414over 2 years ago

A vert tasteful little story, where a guy has the integrity to slip on a condom before he fucks his new girlfriend's cunt for the first time. And it was nice to see them reciprocate the oral sex they got from each other. Nicely done

DanDraperDanDraperabout 2 years ago

Very short, but still a great story. 5-stars.

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I've always had a vivid imagination and fantasizing about the women who have passed through my life goes back as long as I can remember. Upon discovering online erotica, I started to think that maybe I should go ahead and write down some of these fantasies and submit them to ...