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Lustyland was clouded this day
Dear AnalAnnie19, the jest of your story was excellent the whole idea and the scene conjured up left many questions, was this all a daydream at work, a dream at night or an actual occurence that took place. The running on of thoughts to begin with found confusing and hard to follow,when posting on the internet or in this type of format break them up a bit more so that they are easier to follow. Thank You for sharing this story and I hope you write more for good ideas can become stunning rewards for others.
Lovely
Fantastic read, Annie. BTW, can't wait for the next installment of your story with you and Jenny. ;)
Good
Enjoyed it but thought the other two stories were better
Good and stylish
I liked this a lot. You found a way round the usual porn cliches. Great style. The office headlines device is clever. I also liked your/the narrator's insecurity early on: it's funny but real as well. And my favourite line was: 'She's fucking me from behind – in the behind.' Funny, cute and sexy. I hope your behind gets plenty more of the same. And I'd like to see more of your writing too. - jimmy
So well written
Right on the button Annie, different from, but just as good as your earlier tales. Beautifully done - loved it. Going to go away and put something up my bum and masturbate now, probably to Annie's First Love.
Beautiful and poetic
OMG, this is absolutely wonderful! Erotic and tender, lusty and loving. You hit it right on the head, girl! I can't wait to read more.
wow
What a great story, so well written. I think this is the shortest story to ever make cum. I love your other stories as well, keep them coming!
Wonderful
and original and funny and sensual and rather erotic! R.
Positive Writer
Annie is such a positive writer. If U ever want to be left with a warm and Happy feeling - read Annie. If U ever want Ur Pussy to be left with a Warm & Happy feeling - read Annie.
Love & Kisses,
Betty18
Be Naughty
loved it...
sweet,hot, and sexy :)
Yum
Very very .... Mmmmmmmmmmm ... Argh .... Sexxy
Great
This was deep...
Very exciting and well written! I orgasmed while reading your story. Thank you!
Thanks Annie, enjoyed it very much!
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