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Anonymous08/06/08
keep up the good work!
this was very good! i really enjoyed it! that other person that commented, didnt know what they were talking about. i thought it was great! and there's nothing wrong with "lapped up her juices"! That's very creative writing and i say it aptly describes the way Antonio licked her fluids from her skin. well written, Bunny!
English
Lappes up her jucies
My dog lappes water. What erotic phrasing.
You want nothing but public comments, you get comments that would have been private and without a score.
keep up the good work!
this was very good! i really enjoyed it! that other person that commented, didnt know what they were talking about. i thought it was great! and there's nothing wrong with "lapped up her juices"! That's very creative writing and i say it aptly describes the way Antonio licked her fluids from her skin. well written, Bunny!
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