by harryr4u
I'm not being cheeky but you need to learn to write in English or get a proof reader!
when you said you weren't a writer.... what a waste of time.
Just give up, you aren't going to make it. And I don't hide behind anonymity.
sad to hear that was ur best time w females, but i have to admit u had 'stayin' power. wy'd u have to go at 5?
Having your story checked by an experienced writer is needed before you submit any more work.
I am surprised that this git past the moderators.
Peter
I couldn't get past the first 2 paragraphs. Please get an editor before your next submission.