I just saw this chapter and then had to go back and read all the rest... your story is HOT! I can't wait for the next chapters! Don't keep us waiting too long!
by
Anonymous09/02/08
OMG!
i love this chapter!
this has got to be one of the best stories ive read in awhile.i love it cause its so realistic and beautiful how the characters personalities are.especially matt(jesus i wish i could fined a guy like that!lol)
PLEASE!! DO NOT STOP!! KEEP GOING!!
by
Anonymous06/28/09
OUCH
OK almost fell out of the chair laughing over the joke and reaction of Matt when told they were going to be comparing notes.
I let him know that he didn't have a chance because I was falling for a sweetheart in an asshole suit. I thought you were going to take that suit off today, but I see that instead you have paired it with your 'jealous douchebag' hat and your 'I'm-a-total-dumbass' tie. It's such a lovely ensemble."
What great sarcasm and creative thinking! :)
Nice little touch with introducing Jeremy and us finding out he could have been "the other guy" without there being real drama.
I love seeing how Matt "claims" her, but I wonder how many (if any) women really like that?
English
LOVE IT!
This story is awesome. I absoloutely love it!!! Don't stop.
Its about time!!
I love Staci and Matt's story!!! Nice to see an update!! Great job!!
AWESOME
This chapter was awesome. Staci and Matt are a hot couple. I'm ready for the next chapter.
YEA!!!!
I so love this story, I love these two, they are HOT!! Great Writing!
awesome
Awesome 9, can't wait for 10. Matt is hot hot hot!!
WCD
Wow!
I just saw this chapter and then had to go back and read all the rest... your story is HOT! I can't wait for the next chapters! Don't keep us waiting too long!
OMG!
i love this chapter!
this has got to be one of the best stories ive read in awhile.i love it cause its so realistic and beautiful how the characters personalities are.especially matt(jesus i wish i could fined a guy like that!lol)
PLEASE!! DO NOT STOP!! KEEP GOING!!
OUCH
OK almost fell out of the chair laughing over the joke and reaction of Matt when told they were going to be comparing notes.
MORE...........
wow this story is so good, but there has to be more.... PLEASE!!!!
I need a Matt in my life!!!
Sizzling!
I really loved this part:
I let him know that he didn't have a chance because I was falling for a sweetheart in an asshole suit. I thought you were going to take that suit off today, but I see that instead you have paired it with your 'jealous douchebag' hat and your 'I'm-a-total-dumbass' tie. It's such a lovely ensemble."
What great sarcasm and creative thinking! :)
Nice little touch with introducing Jeremy and us finding out he could have been "the other guy" without there being real drama.
I love seeing how Matt "claims" her, but I wonder how many (if any) women really like that?
Definitely a 5!
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