All Comments on 'Book Club'

Quite a lot wrong with this, some things big, some little, but it all adds up to be very annoying and off-putting.

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"<i>cloths</i>" ?? I think you mean "<i>clothes</i>"

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This paragraph, near the start, should have been a warning to bail out, but stupidly, I kept going:-

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<i>"Our sex life is ok; she has never given me a blow job and does not like when I go down on her. She often accuses me of treating her as a port in the night just a person I screw before I have to leave again; which has dampened our sex life. I used to want her all the time. Now I have to be careful because if I come home for the weekend after being gone all week, have sex with her, then leave the following week I have to hear the same argument. So I have learned to surf porn on the net and take care of business myself."</i>

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"<i>Our sex life is ok</i>", followed by "<i>she has never given me a blow job</i>", and "<i>and does not like when I go down on her.</i>" THIS IS NOT IN ANY WAY A SEX LIFE THAT IS OK! Nor is any part of the rest of the paragraph.

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You badly need to figure out what you want to write, then write that, and not somethging else. Perhaps try working with one of the volunteer Lit editors...?

He has lost his wife! All he can do is sit there and ask "What can he do?" Well he fights for his wife! He makes her understand that she is now his slut he is her master. not some bi-sexual DOM. Or of cousre he could start running to lawyer. Sue the book club, personally sue this DOM and then leave the soon to ex-wife to her fate. Oh and make sure EVERYBODY knows what happened.

I found this story to be extremly exciting. The husband should be waiting for his wife with a belt in his hand.

He need to film the next girls meeting. Then divorce her ass.

This could have been hot. What is it with the whore, slut, bitch culture on this section?