All Comments on 'Want to Play'

DAMN YOU ARE ONE GREAT WRIER. THIS NEW STORY IS FUCKING AWESOME.. I HOPE THERE IS MUCH MUCH MORE TO COME OF THIS STORY.......

I like it! Just have someone edit for you and it will flow a lot smoother.

Loved it! More Please!!!!!

This was a great start. I hope you don't stop here!!!!

You have now caught my attention. This is very hot and has major potential. I hope you keep this story going. You have some imagination for someone claiming to be an 18 yr old virgin! ;)

I love Erica all ready she remains me of well me...lol, I can't wait to see what game that will be played already. you are very good at your writing.

finally!! a wm/bw story that's not degrading, and incredibly sweet!! i loved it; please continue!! :-)

~*urdreamgyrl*~

(that's my username)

This is really good

very sexy... love the way your writing's coming along :)

Damn!!!! I want a piece of that cake called Adam and can certainly understand where little miss propriety was going. "Take a walk on the wild side and the colored girls sing....." So the song went, I believe. He sounds just too delicious and I guess if you want to shed a certain persona; do it correctly and at full throttle. Adam certainly seems the right model for the job. HOT DAMN!!!!!

Just enough to make me want more

So good and just for the first chapter, damn

Yay, another tale of 'the scumbag gets the girl.' Why is this such a popular trope in bw/wm stories?