All Comments on 'Cousin Gina'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
The FIRST part was erotic

at least through the hayride. Then, when you get to thebeach there's NO foreplay much with Myra, and NONE AT ALL with Gina. Wham, bam thank you ma'am. A shame.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
could be better

man the story went too fast... not much build up between the guy and Gina, nd if Myra was his girlfriend he would not cum so quick cause they would have been messin around 4 a long time

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
This MUST continue

You can't stop now, it's the beginning of a wonderful and sexy series.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
good story!

I liked it. I think the second one should be more explicit though, maybe even a threesome with gina and myra.

oldwayneoldwayneover 15 years ago
Really Good Tale.

I would like to see you write the sequel.

TeenSpiritTeenSpiritover 15 years ago
Too quick...

...to get to the sex. A little less sheer erotica, a little more romance between the cousins, please.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
What a joke

That was probably the worst story i have ever read. I want my time spent reading back.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
To, "What a Joke" below me:

"Bite Me, Turkey".

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
great

definitely write another!

very well written!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

simply HOT

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
dumb ass writer

you say he was in the eighth grade and saw her at lunch but then say a year later he was in the same school as her as a freshman so if he was in a different school in eighth grade how could he see her at lunch different school different lunch room get a good editor and do a rewrite this sucked

uncledickmeuncledickmeover 8 years ago
Gina sex

Good story yes would love to see more

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
More is an understatement..This was just a good start.

College offers so many DARING locations for the not so obvious places to get off

Turtle1952Turtle1952almost 7 years ago
Oh Yes please

Good story, you can't stop now surely

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I think it's some straight bullshit how my story has been rejected four times just for making references to when I was younger. I wanted people to get the full version of my story but I've had to rewrite it so many times now and change so much of it that it doesn't feel like the original at all.

Yet this person can reference all the way back to the 8th grade?

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