by tommcgee
at least through the hayride. Then, when you get to thebeach there's NO foreplay much with Myra, and NONE AT ALL with Gina. Wham, bam thank you ma'am. A shame.
man the story went too fast... not much build up between the guy and Gina, nd if Myra was his girlfriend he would not cum so quick cause they would have been messin around 4 a long time
You can't stop now, it's the beginning of a wonderful and sexy series.
I liked it. I think the second one should be more explicit though, maybe even a threesome with gina and myra.
...to get to the sex. A little less sheer erotica, a little more romance between the cousins, please.
That was probably the worst story i have ever read. I want my time spent reading back.
you say he was in the eighth grade and saw her at lunch but then say a year later he was in the same school as her as a freshman so if he was in a different school in eighth grade how could he see her at lunch different school different lunch room get a good editor and do a rewrite this sucked
College offers so many DARING locations for the not so obvious places to get off
I think it's some straight bullshit how my story has been rejected four times just for making references to when I was younger. I wanted people to get the full version of my story but I've had to rewrite it so many times now and change so much of it that it doesn't feel like the original at all.
Yet this person can reference all the way back to the 8th grade?