All Comments on 'Knees (08/08)'

It seems sort of cold and empty, ( the room, not the poem). I could imagine the room as an entity, having its own "feelings" whatever a room might feel though, I have no clue.

It made me imagine what all has gone on in there, cheap rooms and expensive ones, alike. I enjoyed the read and where it took me.

NJ

An amazing description of a cold and empty room and by implication alone, how intense the needs are that need fulfilling. I liked this one alot.

perfect.