All Comments on 'Twins Saved by Nudity Ch. 06'

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HoosierFriendHoosierFriendover 15 years ago
The best just got better!

This is a fantastic story! I thought this chapter would never get here but it was well worth the wait.

Spice1959Spice1959over 15 years ago
Not normally one to critisize

But i would like to point out that maybe snowbear should re-read what he edits, then maybe obvious mistakes like "she had gotten caught and had to 'apology' to them!", when it should read "she had gotten caught and had to 'apologise' to them!" might not be overlooked

hammer17hammer17over 15 years ago
wow

Gets better with every chapter.... Hmm to spice1959, I think you spell it apologize, not "apologise", replace the s with a z.. Now I could be wrong but, If I am, them so is the dictionary!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Janice should fuck tyler along with girls

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

@hammer17: If you were using an English dictionary, "apologise" would be correct, but it appears you're using an American one.

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