by Roadbug
This story is moving and fun at the same time. Nice balance and not easy to do. I like it a lot and look forward to every chapter. Thank you for your efforts!
Three stars. It would have been at least four except for the numerous grammatical errors.
I find it annoying that 'loose' is really 'lose' and 'except ' should be 'accept'. Both are commonly used in the wrong context and often.
This is a story, not trying for Purlitzer, just for those who enjoy a good tale and this one is great. Maybe some of us are not Literature majors like me, not everybody was educated in English, so please get real don't criticise. love this