I would like to see where the author is going to take this story line.we haven't seen what the oldest sister is like, yet. the son should become the alpha male in that household over all three females. ...Rich
This is a very well written piece. It is enjoyable, and as far as erotica goes, believable. I want to read more about this relationship.
not good
A great start to what could be another fantastic series. I'll gladly read this one until you are ready to start on Billion Dollar 4 Thanks
Oh yeah, I'm really looking forward to reading the rest of this series.
Wish my family had been like that. Great story
no way in hell he would stay without beating the crap out of his dad TOTAL BULLSHIT AS USUAL.
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the son needs to more dominant
I would like to see where the author is going to take this story line.we haven't seen what the oldest sister is like, yet. the son should become the alpha male in that household over all three females. ...Rich
Very Nice!!
This is a very well written piece. It is enjoyable, and as far as erotica goes, believable. I want to read more about this relationship.
not good
not good
Please, Sir, may we have some more?
A great start to what could be another fantastic series. I'll gladly read this one until you are ready to start on Billion Dollar 4 Thanks
Oh yeah, I'm really looking forward to reading the rest of this series.
Wish my family had been like that. Great story
total crap
no way in hell he would stay without beating the crap out of his dad TOTAL BULLSHIT AS USUAL.
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