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well shit. its 1:15am the next day (8/08)and the once great story has no comments. i guess that says it all, doesn't it. the story we awaited each day with baited breath has turned to shit. finally, no red square by the latest chapters preamble. it seems the' wilderness' is measuring how low he has to go in bringing us from the romantic high of true love and romance down to decadent, slutish eroticism before his adoring fans become apathetic. wheather he is purposely toying with our emotions or progressing to increased levels of eroticism for his own pleasure it is evident that, for most readers, true love is more enjoyable than a relationship based on sexual perversion, no matter how erotic or sexually stimulating. ok, dear wilderness, continue with the once great story, i think. rc
They didn't miss Skinny... me either.
Finally something new, I'm not gonna lie even after feeling confused by the last couple chapters, I've been checking frequently for a new addition. I feel like it's getting back to a good place. After all, I just wanted to see where Doc & Becky went, not Doc, Becky, and random crazies. ;) I think the previous commenter hit it on the head-- sometimes, true love wins us over.
Glad to see more
I've followed this story from the first and loved it till Lisa entered the picture. The threesome is ok but i relly like it best with just Doc and Becky. From the beginning it took me back in time. Will keep looking for more. Mike
MORE!!!!!
Ok come on it's time for another chapter. It's past time already. I have been checking back for months now. Get on with a good story that takes me back.
Mature Hippie
Ugh
I didn't like Skinny being involved. He is an idiot. How can Becky take him seriously when he doesn't seem to really care about her. Actions speak louder than words!
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