The teaser says that the wife is telling this to her husband, no where in the story does it mention that she is married or is telling the story to her husband.
Never mentions Missy being married, her husband, etc. Makes no sense except that Missy is a slut and a moron that had unprotected sex with strangers and is probably infected with a shitload of STD's.....like I said, NO SENSE!
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Anonymous08/07/08
wtf
good god ive had better reads from a box of corn flakes i mean an erotic story doesnt have to just jump right into sex build up the charaters some first make it believable god i cant believe i just wasted that much time from my life that ill never get back.
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Anonymous10/05/08
Go back to the corn flakes box, if it's better!!
Keep up the good work.
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Anonymous12/29/10
Where do I sign up?
I would like to be that girl! That sounds awesome! I almost came reading it!
English
Classy
You have a real classy wife.
W.T.F
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Huh
The teaser says that the wife is telling this to her husband, no where in the story does it mention that she is married or is telling the story to her husband.
Der
drivel, I say.
No sense
Never mentions Missy being married, her husband, etc. Makes no sense except that Missy is a slut and a moron that had unprotected sex with strangers and is probably infected with a shitload of STD's.....like I said, NO SENSE!
wtf
good god ive had better reads from a box of corn flakes i mean an erotic story doesnt have to just jump right into sex build up the charaters some first make it believable god i cant believe i just wasted that much time from my life that ill never get back.
Go back to the corn flakes box, if it's better!!
Keep up the good work.
Where do I sign up?
I would like to be that girl! That sounds awesome! I almost came reading it!
Lame.
Pretty lame and probably wrongly categorized.
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