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as always please hurry with the next one!!!
Hurry, hurry, hurry³ with the next chapter! I want/need/ am addicted to this story!
Thumbs Up!!
Loved it, loved it, loved it. Enough with the apologies about no sex already!! Mucho Gracias to your editor. She's definitely helping the chapters come faster. So please will you both hurry up with the next one? Thanks in advance. :)
Eek!
Cliffhanger. I love your postings!
Exiting? Nar!
Flipping nerve RACKING. Real good read and very exiting I'll be waiting for the next chapter, as always, with baited breath.
As always
absolutely wonderful. I am always so happy when there is a new of your chapters to read. Thank you.
Awesome
This is so amazing, i will be disappointed if you don't get this published. Your characters are all unique, the bonds they all share are understandable this is honestly the best story I've read in years,i really hope that "Mara" and "Angel" can make it to "Alexander" safely. I cried from laughin so hard at "Angel" getting pissed off at "Mara" slamming on the brakes.
No sex, but still 100% good!
XD
Who cares...
that it did'nt have sex?! That was freakin awesome. Can't wait for the next installment. I'm on the edge of my seat!
i agree
it's great you don't need sex in every chapter to be an amazing story .. my only complaint would be there isn't more story posted i am excited this story is worth waiting for can't wait for the next chapters...
YES!
Who cares if there isn't sex! lo. I love all your chapters that you have writen so far and I LOVE this chapter!
You dont know how excited I am that he almost found her! :D hahahaha I want the two love birds to be reunited soooo badly and there doesn't even have to be make up sex, that could be for the following chapter lol. AHHH I'm excited!!!!!!!! hahahaha Good you put me in a good mood, I'm about to leave for work so this should help me get through the day :) PLEASE right another chapter asap!!
wow
I am so excited to see were anna and mara will end up. I hope that they don't get hurt. Keep up the really good work looking forward to the next chapter.
Love it!
Please more! Thanks!!
AHHHHHHHHH
its torturous not having them together!!!! Very excited for the next chapter, i hope you'll update soon!
Exciting!?
To the point of disbelief, they've been... not together for a very long time, lol. Waiting for the next attachment, tnme3.
Awesome, awesome, awesome
first of all...there doesn't have to be sex for the chapter to be great. I will be honest though, I can't wait for them to be face-to-face again. USA
More more more!!!
Gods I am loving this!!! I am sooooooooooooooooo loving this!!!!
WOW
My dear lady that was AMAZING as your work always is, but if you keep us waiting so long with holding our breath we are bound to suffocate!! Please hurry!!
sweet
no sex is fine but that chapter was great just the same now i dont know what is want for them to be found or for them to fined this pablo guy and kick his but
Pure Brilliance!
Edge of your seat stuff this is!
yes its getting exciting !!
i held my breath as i clicked on lit this morning...hoping and YES it was there!!! And it was just as good as i hoped it would be...aww your a wee tease girl...yeah i miss the sex but i lovvvvvvve the foreplay of the awesome story !!well done!
aaahhhhh
Oh my god every time i see a new chapter my heart leaps for joy. If this was a book not even my bf could get me away from it.
aye
I'm so in love with this novella!
There are just no words...
...to describe how good this story is. It's better than some of the crap I've bought off the bookshelves in stores. And I mean that!!!!
Horray a new chapter!!!!
I can't wait until Cael gets Anna back. He will get her back, right? He better. Great chapter keep it up!
loving it
definitely getting interesting, cant wait until Anna and Alexander meet up
It's always been exciting!
But now it's super exciting!!! I cannot WAIT for the next chapter!!
This is such a terrific story!
I am always looking forward to seeing your next chapter... and this one did not disappoint. Keep up the great work!
Beautiful
I can't wait for the next chapter. Please, please, please tell me you are working on it.
great!!!
great chapter as usual...i didn't care that there was no sex...the story is so captivating i can wait :) can't wait for the next installment.
DAMN STRAIGHT
YES!!!!!!!!! Yea there wasnt any sex in this, but that doesnt matter. This is already so exciting :) And plus, we need to have chapters like this that lead and help with the plot and such:) PLEASE hurrry and write the next chapter. I need to know what happens. PLEASEEEEE
Awesome...sex or no sex!
Thank you, thank you, thank you for continuing to faithful post on a regular basis and for being so thoughtful of your readers who luv you for it...along with your wonderfully talented storytelling! I luv this story and can't wait til Cael and Anna are reunited and am crossing my fingers that Mara belongs to Darien or Kerian. I hope that they get there before Anna has to suffer anymore abuse and that the confrontation completes Mara's transformation. The strong bond between the two is amazing and the sharing of blood, promises and names was touching. Please keep it coming!
I hate you hurry and post like in 2 days!!!
Omg i hope no one dies except for poloa something!!! I luv you and your my favorite author in the frigen world!
Type faster!!!!
The suspense is killing me.
great as always!!!
omg! what a great chapter. you did exactly what i wanted...more Alexander scenes! i just hope you're not going to make jay and angel fall in love. i sense something happening. i can't wait for the next chapter. i'm on the edge of my seat!
AWESOME
MORE! I eagerly await every new chapter of this story. Sex or no sex, I don't care. I just have to know what happens next! :)
Great!
It's always exciting! Thanks for giving each of your characters such vivid personalities. I also think that maybe Mara and Kieran can hit it off, hehe. Can't wait for the next chapter! Thanks for taking the time to write!
I was reading so hard, I forgot to blink
Kudos on another well-crafted chapter. Where are my eyedrops???
Super!
Loved it! Your stories are great - no sex needed. The plot, characters, relationships, and your writing - just incredible. Please write the next chapter soon!
OMG
I stumbled on your stories today and read the whole series in one day!!! I couldn't stop. This story is amazing!!! Can't wait for the next one... Hurry Up!!!
Soon!
Not sure how much longer I can wait for Alexander and Angel not to be together!!! Please post again soon! Love the story!
Angel
What could I possiblly add that hasn't been said? Your story is wonderful and please share more soon....
OMG!!!
This is so good that I am almost afraid of it ending!! I can't wait for the next chapter! Absolutely wonderful!!! GO ALEXANDER!!! YEAH!!
fantastic story
elianna you r an absolute natural at writing. this story is 100% bestselling material
Wow!
Who needs sex when the plot's this good?
Amazing, as usual. More... more... more... :-)
brilliant!
found your series today and just devoured all the chapters. You'd be a bestseller! I can't wait for more...please update soon! You write professionally, it's one of the best reads I've come across in MONTHS! please write a novel! and let us know how to recognize it as yours once it's published!
Mara and Kieran!
I would LOVE to see Mara and Kieran get together. I think they would be a great match, and Kieran needs a woman. Great story...I came in at Chapter 11 or 12 and read the whole thing in one sitting! And I wait for each next installment with bated breath....you absolutely rock!
I'm hooked
Alright, I have spent the better part of the day reading this story, lol. This is hands down the best story I have read on Lit. Keep up the good work.
WOW!!!
I am totally hooked... check every couple of days to see your additions... totally worth the wait
CANT WAIT!
i love it ! im so excited to read the next one! please hurry and post it!
whoa
Thanks for the new chapter!!! I'm anxiously awaiting the next one!!!
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