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Very hot..
...but I was hoping that Phil would end up sucking both guys. He doesn't know what he's missing as a true bi guy.
Not really the 'whole group thing'
Would have been a much better story had Phil gotten into the 'whole group thing' by going down on the guys & letting them do his ass. "What happens in Jamacia stays in Jamacia." Also, Phil cums way too many times for realism. He doesn't have to cum in EVERY orifice every time they get together.
TOO HOT?
I agree with both of the previous comments. The story becomes redundant and a little boring with the matter-of-fact fucking like a laundry list. It would have been hotter and better if you had Phil overwhelmed and winding up sucking and even getting fucked in his ass for a change with less of the other repetitive narrative. I gather the author is way into anal sex (so was i when I got the chance for such a treat) but letting his own phobia of bottoming get in the way of a hotter story?
Good story
i agree let it happen sucking cock is not so bad and getting fucked in the ass can be incredible. your story would have rated a 100 if phil had gone down on the guys and ate a little of their cum.
Oh Oh........
I didn't understand what the guy was saying who had commented on your Hedonism story but I did as soon as I read a few lines of Jamacia Bi-Way.... They are both the same story with just the names changed......
Gonna have give a real low grade on this one......
bisexuellaty
What a fantastic story. I'm a lot older now and until reading your story I've been hetro but it has got me thinking. I am going to my local swingerclub for a bi nite. I am going to let this happen and I will enjoy it.
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