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Beast takes a Beauty Ch. 04

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous08/07/08

yay finally more

great story..now we will get to see more inside of who Ben is.. this should get a little interesting.. don't keep us waiting so long for more .. I like this story and I'm looking forward to more..

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by Anonymous08/07/08

Good Story

I am enjoying this story, but I do have one little thing to say. We know they are speaking french, it is not neccisary to put their words in french and then the translation. Its easier to read if you simply state what they are saying. But other then that another enjoyable chapter thank you

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by bad_girl6908/07/08

FINALLY

I have been waiting so long for you to write another chapter... YEAH!! lol But it just made me sad because it was so sort compared to the others :( Please can you write some more and write fast. PLEASEEEE

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by Anonymous08/08/08

I'm so glad

you've finally written more of this story, I just wish it were longer.

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by Anonymous08/08/08

Love it!

FINALLY! Please more but dont make us wait so long! Love it! Cant wait for more! Thanks!!

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by Tricialen08/08/08

So Glad

So happy that you have continued with this story. Can't wait to learn more about Ben...

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by tnme308/12/08

On Edge

We're all so happy that you updated your story but... Quality over quantity. I guess that you are building up a fight and this was a short chapter but I still love the story. Post the next attachment soon! (Please)

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by Anonymous08/17/08

Oooh!

Raegan is not going to like being used, Ben's is going to need some divine intervention on this one. Good story Siddisticbeuty, I'd really like to find out more about the pack and the characters you created, but I'm especially curious to find out how Ben is going to explain this hot mess to his "breeder".

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by DarkWriter1303/13/09

pretty nice!!!

i love this story!!!!! its so well written, but i think you should have made raegen (thats how you spell it right?) a little more reluctant. the story was still really good, and i like the french in it, even though the actual french words arent necessary.

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More please!!

I think this could go far. The characters are strong! Please give us more!!

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by LaFemmeWildcat08/04/09

please?!

you have to write more! i demand it.

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by erin195511/14/09

more

wheres the rest?

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by Anonymous02/11/10

any more??

Is there going to be anymore to this story?? Its been ages

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by Anonymous02/14/10

more more more

i want to know wat happens... is there anymore to this story?

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by Anonymous05/08/10

More

Please continue writing. I want to know what happen next

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by Anonymous06/26/10

Keep it going.

This is going great. I can't wait to find out what happens next. How can they find love through rape?

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by cristina012307/06/10

more please!

i cant wait to see what happens next!

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by Maxillina07/15/10

can't wait

Wowsers i can't wait to read the next chapter!!!

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by Anonymous08/05/10

finish plz

Can't wait for the next installment plz continue with this story and good work

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by Anonymous09/07/10

Magnifique!!

This is one of the best stories i've ever read!!
Using french in between makes it a lot sexier, too.
Please continue!!!

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by Ayami12/29/10

PLEASE continue

i hope u do another i want to no what will happen?

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by Anonymous04/26/11

where ar u??????????????????

omg i keep wishing and re-wishing that you will update something on this story and well ............nothing. =( hope you find inspiration soon and continue with the story.

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by Anonymous10/15/11

aww

i enjoyed this series but the chapters are too short and to be honest to fast paced. i do look forward to a continuation, so dont be selfish and write more :-P

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by fefe42811/30/11

An ending to this story would be nice!!!

You've left us all hanging to see what happens. Does Ben win his fight, and what happens when Reagan finds out Ben's plans? I hope you plan to finish this sooner rather than later!

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by Anonymous09/18/12

so what happen next?

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by drews_lette1101/06/13

You have got to be kidding me

You stop writing this story and no posts for FOUR YEARS!!! I'm half tempted to take over this story just to finish it.

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by Maria_Luna01/09/13

finish?

I would love to read the rest of the story

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by primadea02/20/13

hmmm

ok the story is god, but the French is horendeous :(

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by Anonymous10/07/13

NEXT CHAPTER PRETTY PLEASE!?!??!?!?!!??!?!?

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by chocolatesista01/20/14

more please

Continue, Continue, and Continue!!!!!!! LOL

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by QNasty02/20/14

Weird..

This is so weird.. everythings happening so fast. It's good dont get me wrong but weird. Not really for me but i'm glad I read it.

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by Anonymous02/28/14

ANOTHER NO ENDING STORY,,,SUCKS

WHY,,do people do this,,,,have some respect for others who become your fans,,although im sure you wont get this after 8 years of being inactive,but it helps me vent about all the unfinished stories on here,,,,WASTE OF MY TIME,,,

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by Anonymous07/26/14

chapters

these chapters are actually pages. at most, this should have been two chapters. that being said, the sexual encounters were excellent, and should titillate the most jaded reader. read a similar tale that spanned about thirty long chapters. it was one of the best reads i ever encountered. this tale has the potential to surpass that, if the author commits to expending the effort this tale deserves.

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by avengiline08/31/14

he is an asshole... but its a good story

Why does he have to be such a jerk? Needs more... its really short

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by Anonymous01/15/15

more please

Please tell me there is another chapter

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by LunaMarie66608/10/15

More Please!!

I have certainly enjoyed this story; can't find many that follow the forward ways of wolves as well as including the mating knot at the end! Keep up the good work and I hope to read more soon even if it has been years since you last touched this story!

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by Anonymous01/14/17

Well

I wonder if he ever came back...

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by Anonymous02/21/17

Finish this please!!

You have to continue this, it's not fair to leave us all hanging!!

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by Anonymous04/11/17

Possible ending

He walked back to the cabin spent a few hours warming up to come back to a massacre. The former Alpha would rather kill everyone than let a new Alpha take over...dun dun ddduuuuuunnnnn.

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