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by michchick9808/07/08

Not bad

Not too many people can pull of 2nd person POV, but this wasn't bad. You told the story well, although the dialogue left a bit to be desired. All in all, not bad for your first try.

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by Anonymous10/19/10

Wow!

Amazing story! Very vivid, I loved the detail and intensity!

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