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As good as the first!
This second part was just long enough to keep my interest up without being too long. I can't wait for the second part since my mind is imagining just what happens next and wonder from where that takes you.
Keep it up great story line so far.
nice story
Hi Taylor,
I am enjoying your story, just a couple of respectful suggestions. Please cut the use of all the exclamation marks, it sounds like a teenage girl's diary. One more thing, it's 'lose' not 'loose'.
I am really looking forward to more of these gorgeous guys and their romance.
love it
ok i think its a wonderful story dont listen to the guy at the top the exclamation marks are perfectly situated to put emphasis on the more important aspects of the story hence the use of an exclamation mark honestly some poeple
They are both too sweet!
:3
Cute
Sound like they will become such a cuteeeee couple
makes me wanna go out there and find that special person
thank you and keep the story coming.
chapter 3 wait for me
god pass me my hanky.? lol loving it.?
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