All Comments on 'Sigma Girl'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Give Me A Break

The author has either never been to college with a Greek community or hasn't been involved for some reason. Most students could never afford to support a "sweetheart", as Jeff described, even with resource pooling. And, I doubt any campus would allow a girl to live full-time in a frat house. That said, the story could've used considerable editting. It's chock full of errors. Interesting sex scene, though.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
hope there is more

This is one of the best presented premises for a story that I've come across on this site, my only suggestion would be to slow it down a little and go into further detail of her seduction and her internal struggle with shame she's experiencening from the joy of being used like a whore. The turning came way to quickly. This is a story that should have between 4 to 6 chapters and levels of degradation with acceptance coming near the end

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
stupid actions, stupid girl

maybe she wont get AIDS before the four years are up

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